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#Losing Someone (Name In Works)
sonic idol
Zamn. I felt that one in my heart
It’s poems like these that I’m happy to leave be
It’s like a blanket you pull out of the dryer, and even if there might be lint or something, you just want to enjoy the emotional release you get from it
sonic idol
Catharsis poems are also weird to judge because it’s difficult to know what headspace people are in when they write it
sonic idol
that like fills my heart
yw?
sonic idol
Oh my gosh, I wrote one the other day and I’m scared to look at it because I was pissed when I wrote it. Maybe we should unpack it now 👀
wild estuary
Oh my gosh, I wrote one the other day and I’m scared to look at it because I was...
send it when?
💀
sonic idol
send it when?
smh, I need to snap a photo of it. I wrote it on my Econ notes
maiden kraken
Okie
This is so beautiful
I love this
Honestly
It captures the essence of loosing someone beautifully
I would like it if you you elaborate on the memories being good ones and them now haunting you
wild estuary
Certainly! The poem suggests that the memories of the departed loved one were once cherished and brought joy to the story. However, after their loss, these memories now haunt the narrator. This could be interpreted in a few ways.
First, the memories may be haunting because they are a constant reminder of what has been lost. The story may be grappling with the pain of the loved one's absence and find it difficult to come to terms with the fact that they are no longer present. The memories serve as a bittersweet reminder of the past, and the longing for what once was can feel overwhelming and haunting.
Second, the memories may be haunting because the story evoke a sense of longing and yearning. The story may long to relive the moments shared with the loved one, to hear their laughter again, and to see their smile. The memories may serve as a reminder of the void left behind by the loved one's absence, and the pain of their absence may be felt keenly through the memories that were once cherished.
Lastly, the memories may be haunting because they bring about a sense of nostalgia. The story may be reminiscing about the happy times shared with the loved one, and the stark contrast between those happy memories and the current reality of their absence can be distressing. The memories may evoke a sense of longing for a time that is now gone, which can be both comforting and painful at the same time.
Overall, the idea of memories haunting the story suggests a complex and emotional relationship with the past. The memories may be a source of comfort and pain, representing the love shared with the departed loved one but also serving as a reminder of their absence, which can be difficult to reconcile.
maiden kraken
I also liked what you did there where you said in a place that feels so unknown, really emphasizes the effect this person has had on you that now they aren’t there you don’t know the place anymore really like um alienates the person
maiden kraken
Okie
It’s really great
Yes
I really really like it
It’s eloquently conveys the loss of a person
Well done!
wild estuary
Love's Eternal Flame: A Shakespearean Sonnet
Upon yon meadow green and fair,
Where sun doth kiss the dewy air,
Where flowers bloom with fragrant grace,
And butterflies dance in dainty chase,
A tale of love doth now unfold,
In words of old, a story bold,
Of two hearts bound in sweetest vow,
With passions deep that do endow.
A fair maiden, gentle and kind,
Her beauty bright, a treasure find,
Her eyes like stars that light the night,
Her smile a beacon, pure and bright.
And a noble knight, gallant and strong,
His sword unsheathed, righting the wrong,
His armor gleaming in the sun,
His heart ablaze, a battle won.
In fields of green, they chanced to meet,
And hearts did skip a rapid beat,
Their eyes locked in a fateful gaze,
As love did set their souls ablaze.
With shy smiles and bashful blush,
Their hands did touch in gentle rush,
A spark ignited, love's first flame,
A passion fierce, they could not tame.
Through trials and tribulations dire,
Their love burned bright, a steadfast fire,
They faced the wrath of fate's cruel hand,
But love prevailed, a bond so grand.
In moonlit nights and starry skies,
They whispered vows, with longing sighs,
Their hearts entwined, forever one,
A love story that ne'er was done.
So, let us raise a toast, my friend,
To love that's true, a timeless trend,
Inspired by the bard of old,
Whose tales of love are never cold.```DAMN
this is well written
I was expecting a tragedy as I was reading that but it turned out to be happy
wild estuary
💀
maiden kraken
You really made the reader expect a tragedy but didn’t give them one which is really well done
wild estuary
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maiden kraken
I really liked that
Because at the end I was not satisfied but shocked
Because I didn’t expect it to be a happy ending
maiden kraken
There is a micro tension built here when you say through trials and tribulations diré but you don’t use it and pass it up the clear lack of tension and drama in this sonnet really juxtaposes well with the method used to convey this tail as it is shakespearian and his plays are meant to be full of drama
Well done
The use of anticlimax is well done here
wild estuary
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maiden kraken
Dw
maiden kraken
Yes pls
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