teal hawk
*The world discrimates
On the base of color,
Nation, Calling names,
Yet I turn a blind eye.
Victims of crimes
Awaiting judgement, Unmentioned
Roaming free
Yet I say nothing, Ashamed.
I raise my voice
To the injustice of the world, Unheard
I bring my eyes
To see the unseen, Ignored
No more I will stay still,
No more I will be the bystander.
My watchful eyes shall burn those who discriminate,
And my voice shall bring judgement on sinners.*
It still needs a title too.
queen elbow
Maybe, you can add how people suffer from the discrimination, showing it through images, similes and/or metaphors.
Title can be anything that surrounds the poem. Something that's the heart of it. Best of luck @teal hawk !
teal hawk
Maybe, you can add how people suffer from the discrimination, showing it through...
Okay thanks
brittle ingot
maybe you could name it something along the lines of ''judgement'' or ''unheard''
teal hawk
Okay thanks ❤
flat verge
the name rly depends on how much power the character has , if they are a civilian i would name it "bystander" if they a servant of justice and have impact on cases directly ,i would call it "the jury" but my personal favorite is "crimes shine on blind eyes" feel free to use any of them