Loud and aggressive,
Like a storm on the sea,
Never ending in its peak,
The air reaks and the fish cry,
Waiting and wanting for the air to dry.
At storms end do the fish rest,
Finally sleeping after there test.
#Sons Of Thunder.
opaque cypress
grim bluff
i love that its a short poem, that allows it to deliver the point well
btw is "the storm" a metaphor for something else?
opaque cypress
Glad you liked it being short, I tend to do that with alot of my poems. Also yes the storm is a metaphor for my mind and its negative thoughts while the fish represent me trying to swim through them safely ^^
Also the title was just a refrence to James and John from the bible. Jesus named them for being fierce which i believed described my mind aptly at times.
grim bluff
Glad you liked it being short, I tend to do that with alot of my poems. Also yes...
woah thats a great metaphor actually. quite relatable too. i love writing short poems too
grim bluff
Also the title was just a refrence to James and John from the bible. Jesus named...
oh yes the title is really fitting then
opaque cypress
woah thats a great metaphor actually. quite relatable too. i love writing short ...
As much as i do enjoy writing the short poems i do wish i could write longer ones at times. Some poems on here are multiple paragraphs long and when i try to do that i find the point gets lost along the way for me.
Have you posted any of your own on here?
grim bluff
As much as i do enjoy writing the short poems i do wish i could write longer one...
omg yes same personally short poems just help me deliver the point well
grim bluff
Have you posted any of your own on here?
yes a few
opaque cypress
yes a few
Same for me so far but certainly written alot more then i ever thought i would in this short period so here is to many more for us and hopefully good ones at that.
grim bluff
Same for me so far but certainly written alot more then i ever thought i would i...
yess definitely, i got into writing poetry in 2022 and its actually helped me gather the thoughts in my head well plus its really fun to see how creative i can be lol🥰
opaque cypress
Totally agree and in that regard its pretty surprising how creative we can be espically when the right mood hits. At least now i strike the iron while its hot instead of just being like "oh thats cool" and forgetting about it.
I am the same only got into it november 2022 and been doing one or two a week since
grim bluff
Totally agree and in that regard its pretty surprising how creative we can be es...
yess exactlyy
opaque cypress
When i get the time i will make sure you check out some of your poems too!