Waves in Marigold

[pastel fjord]

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[delicate saffron]

i like it

[nimble rune]

Wonderful

[pastel fjord]

I'm glad!

[pastel fjord]

Thank you :)

[muted marlin]

I really like the rhythm in it

at the middle the words just started becoming a rap

your poem could serve as nice lyrics for a pop/rap song

and it's quite creative to say "colours... swimming into horizon"

[swift obsidian]

💪🏽 nice rhythm. Makes a nice spoken piece and qualifies for the ocean daily prompt 🌊

[pastel fjord]

I am positively surprised at times when my poems turn out with potential for evolving into songs :) That happened with 'He has time' which I wrote a full rap from. Thank for your the kind comments.

[pastel fjord]

Glad to hear that it works as a spoken piece, thanks!

[pastel fjord]

Waves in Marigold