I want some feedback on this poem please (first poem I have ever made)

[proud nebula]

This is great for a first poem! i love it exceppt poems must"nt be always rhyming and u also wrote some long lines at the first stanza which is amazing great work!

[compact horizon]

Thank you so much for the feedback!

[unreal pond]

Rhyming is hard so f that, it's hard to connect and this poem is really Good

[proud nebula]

he did it tho

[unreal pond]

Yeah, it's pretty easy if you can remember every word from the dictionary, but in all seriousness he did it