Round 1: The C one way is bad here. For one you have to comm with voice if you one way anything and don't hold it yourself. For two you should really be aggressively taking A space as its more important. So a smoke A lobby is better. Even in this situation you basically need 3 people to take space in a place on Lotus whether that be C or A and you have that on neither extremity so you need to comm for breach to go A or call a push down C.
Your pistol gun fight hygeine is pretty bad. You shouldn't spam with pistols generally speaking. Also you shouldn't tuck at 1:13 on the clove. If you vod review a pro, i vod review Zander personally, you will see the ego that you need to rank up. He would certainly fight the clove here. At the end of the day neon will trade on flank anyways because he has nowhere to tuck.
Round 2: Bying regen is fine, I guess, but its definetly safer to buy heavy armor and stinger here especially on B. Your one way is the same thing as before. I would route stairs here for sure. Its easier to trade people and you can get surprise kills or spams in their smoke and trade people who are holding lines from site like skye was.
Round 3: Its crucial you find a teamate with a pistol and ask for that instead of buying, regen shield is good on bonus so thats good. Play with breach hes pushing and your baiting hard and just sitting back. Your mound smoke is bad, I get the goal but just smoke main and comm to neon to run into it since she has an escape tool. It will be infinitely easier to hold site. When they killed neon don't smoke main, you can't hold site at this point, just group for a retake, you could do the retake smoke then which has more value. other than that nice sheriff those were clean shots