Dia2 | Asc2 Last Act Dm

[lofty dagger]

https://youtu.be/09QiB8nsvlo
I'm on the brink of crying as this feels impossible. I'm trying my hardest to win and the aim calmly. I just want to win some Dms. My notes from hooj are:
General

• Aim technique is costing your fights that you really should be converting; this game was a 13/9 off of those merits alone.
  • Aim past moving targets to contain them
  • Aim more smoothly when having to take wider shots
    Defense
  • Plans against potential enemy rushes leave a lot to be desired, try to work on these
  • Play around your operator a lot more vocally, your goal is to maximize their odds of finding a good line that an enemy is likely to peek
    Offense
• I expect you to have a read on the enemy team by round 5.
  • Who peeks what agressively?
  • How fast do they rotate?
  • What space do they frequently contest?
  • Remember, a large majority of players in this game do not give a single shit about ranking up, and are on autopilot. Use this to your advantage.

I'm playing the aimlabs playlist everyday and im on day 48 today. I play dms every day focusing and tryharding to win and aim calmly.
Tracker: https://tracker.gg/valorant/profile/riot/ValpsZ%23EUW/overview

[devout crypt]

1. Your dueling pattern is too predictable. You enter a bursting pattern with the exact same tempo every single time. Try to incorporate deadzoning, unilateral deadzone, unilateral bursting, longer strafes, crouching. As of right now your movement feels too much "by the book". It lacks personality and unpredictability.

2. Your audio spatial awareness is honestly abysmal. I'd suggest checking on your hardware or increasing in game sound effect volume. You're missing too many obvious sound cues for enemy positions.

3. Your mouse control looks excellent. If you were shooting like this in ranked you wouldn't be D2. This leads me to believe you're panicking in real matches and your technique takes a toll because of it.

[lament warren]

Aim is not your problem anymore are you sure you are being proactive and thinking about how to play vs enemy team/ making the right choices and taking good fights? Your tracker does not reflect your raw aim and I would definitely favor you over most people I see in my games to win a fight so something must be going on ingame