Not a cypher main, but I've played him a fair amount earlier. Thought I'd point out things that stood out to me cuz if it stood out to a diamond, should stand out to an immo :D (take with grain of salt)
2:57 - you spot reyna but don't call it out to your raze as she rotates. she died for no reason 3:20 ;-; oh wait that's your duo too! D:
6:58 - maybe push closer to main to swing with your breach? I don't think you called out someone broke your main trip either. Sage spotted vents so it's probably safe for you to walk up to double swing/get in position to trade your breach. You also had a cage to block off heaven to be extra sure.
15:4 - if you're planning on playing retake, I don't think you need that one way or such aggressive trips. Your set up this round is more stall friendly. Just pointing it out in case you want to alter it for a different scenario. Retake friendly would probably trip backsite, or past the default plant box on site and cage there to discourage people from pushing in further and overheating, for example
16:40 - ... you have a cage. You have the something you're looking for. I'd consider caging mid right away before you tuck there. Would have given you information if they crossed.
21:20 - cage before shooting ult to isolate.
22:10 - I'd probably prefer playing around Elbow with this setup tbh. That way, paired with the cage you can get better value out of the A main trip. Have the breach play heaven instead. You can fall back and hold heaven with him if they get site, and you have a good cam for retake. If you decide to stay elbow instead, can still cage and get value out of a trip on site. You don't seem to be getting much value out of the ramps trip.
That's just my opinion though
Okay, so I just checked a Nats vod and he def seems to favor elbow, and has a better trip for heaven, better cams too. idk if you're following a different pro, but you should probably look into this.
Playing on site makes you slower on rotates and traps you too.