Hey hey Michael, I went through your first 5 rounds and this is what I could see in them.
r1 - I would reposition behind the box after dashing out. If you go peek heaven there what happens is that you can get flooded and now if you want to pull back you're fighting ramps from a really shitty angle. Besides that you shouldn't peek the Jett rafters, your gekko is about to make contact with her so if she pushes you she's traded almost 100%, I'd just ignore it and fight ramps with the sage.
Also comm for ur brim to play more towards the middle so he can smoke for A too. Fade & Jett hold is pretty weak so you should be playing for a retake if you can't find a pick.
r2 - You overrotated. I would be instantly running to hold sewers after fade eye spots nothing and hold that until i have enough info that the enemy is executing before I rotate. If they seem to be rotating you can pull back out of sewers and hide A lobby and hopefully look for some easy cheese kills. Besides that I didn't like the smoke, your teamate is in a gunfight with the omen. You should just run and gun at him from your position. Smoking there gives him more leverage than urself. After you kill him you can smoke yourself off though to calm the situation a bit.
And most of all you bought full util on a save round. If you didn't get a kill you'd be going into r3 without a full shield. Make sure you have atleast 3.9k for buy round, preferably more cuz u need util too.
r3 - You played the round pretty well, only scary thing was swinging the jett smoke. I think that mightve been a oneway for enemies mid bottom. Besides that you playedd off your sage well and well the dash happens to the best of us.
r4 - You know Jetts location off of sage so I'd just peek that with ADS or atleast ADS as I peek and realize it's a headshot angle. Go for single shots there cuz even a burst would be hard to control there and move after every shot. Strafing in a fight from such an angle is ESSENTIAL. And once the enemy breaks wall you can smoke vent off to get to the safer side. Just take mind of enemies spraying your smoke.
r5 - After getting healed you threw a smoke ramps which I don't like. It basically makes you avoid fights while right now I'd want a pick asap to get more knives back.
I'll watch more rounds later maybe but from these rounds I think some of ur issues may be:
• peeking with intent
• crosshair placement (your crosshair rests on the floor a LOT and is often body level during fights)
• over rotating, you rotate off of info which is good. But until you get a read on the enemies playstyle you don't wanna full commit rotate unless you know the enemy is executing.
I think some Guardian deathmatches could help you. Try to find a site/area and just defend it. And kill with headshots only, while making sure you move after every shot. If the kill isn't a headshot, it's a bad kill.