♬ Waterflame - Sky Fortress x Aitch & AJ Tracey - Rain

[lyric ferry]

Sky Shredder by dorvict

Song: Waterflame - Sky Fortress x Aitch & AJ Tracey - Rain
Level ID: 88136707
Downloads: 82674
Song ID: 552058
Song URL: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/552058
Thumbnail: https://i.ytimg.com/vi/zPz52Gm6qMo/mqdefault.jpg

-# Submission ID: 6a11fcf2289d4e0436c853b5
-# Status: Rejected

[fossil vapor]

i hope this is better now

@soft drum

[chilly cradle]

@fossil vapor, your submission has been rejected by @soft drum. Reason: goes offbar at the same time. If you have any questions, feel free to DM them.

[soft drum]

i mean

1:22

[fossil vapor]

still?

[soft drum]

yea theres extra bar

from what i hear

[fossil vapor]

how am i supposed to fix it

do i push it back?

[soft drum]

wait

[fossil vapor]

what happened?

[soft drum]

cut vocals after "All up on a bitch, can't tame man, shovin'" then move 1 bar "Mcglovin', run jokes, get blooded (baow-baow)"

2 bars

wait

1 bar

move 1 bar

[fossil vapor]

ok

[soft drum]

or you can cut vocals after "Mcglovin', run jokes"

and move vocals 1 bar

the 2 part

yk

[fossil vapor]

like this?

i lowkey didn't understand much of what you said so this is what i got out of it

[soft drum]

still offbar

wait

something like this (0:48)

[soft drum]

cut when the vocals say shovin "All up on a bitch, can't tame man, shovin'", now you have 2 parts and the 2nd part to your right move it by 1 bar (4 beats) "Mcglovin', run jokes, get blooded (baow-baow)"

idk if thats understandable

[fossil vapor]

like this?

[soft drum]

still offbar

you cut out a part

you need to cut

youll have 2 parts

and that 2nd part move a little

[fossil vapor]

honestly at this point if you want to take the idea just take it

its so annoying to make

[fossil vapor]

this is probably that last time ill change it

if its still not onbar then I'll just accept defeat

[soft drum]

guess what

its onbar

[fossil vapor]

finally😭

[soft drum]

could you add some fade out and fade in

on these

so its like smooth

[fossil vapor]

i don't think i can on fl studio mobile

[soft drum]

you on fl mobile?

damn

[fossil vapor]

yeah i "bought" it a few days ago

[soft drum]

could you like make the same thing but the silence is in the extra bar?

so in this case 1:22