♬ Spaze - Underworld x Kanye West (ft. Lupe Fiasco) - Touch The Sky

[teal jewel]

Underworld by hfcRed

Song: Spaze - Underworld x Kanye West (ft. Lupe Fiasco) - Touch The Sky
Level ID: 38674703
Downloads: 328952
Song ID: 642021
Song URL: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/642021
Thumbnail: https://i.ytimg.com/vi/l_d52x6f8hc/mqdefault.jpg
Notes: RESUBMISSION!!!! on beat and on key, PLEASE tell me if there is something I need to change as I got no other feedback on the previous thread of this other than "offbeat", starts at 0:36, both vox and instrumental are @ 110 bpm.

-# Submission ID: 69a9b874e550055f7e479227
-# Status: Rejected

[distant forge]

Are you sure what this is onbeat? It goes offbeat on 1:12

[unreal socket]

@drifting walrus, your submission has been rejected by @rugged umbra. Reason: what kost, also pretty sure touch the sky has no key, so no pitch needed. If you have any questions, feel free to DM them.

[drifting walrus]

both at 110

[rugged umbra]

no thats not what offbeat is

[drifting walrus]

ok but like is it actually offbeat at 1:12 cause it's starting to sound a bit off to me

[distant forge]

It’s actually offbeat

[drifting walrus]

alright

i'll fix that and then resubmit for the final time cause i'm not making a 4th revision of this

also remove the pitch

[rugged umbra]

u miight wanna make 1 version with and without pitch

im not fully sure its keyless

[drifting walrus]

sure

it's just 2 semitones

so

[rugged umbra]

wait isnt touch the sky a# minor

[distant forge]

You’re not fully sure?

[distant forge]

I’m pretty sure what verses and chorus are keyless, but not sure about post-chorus

[rugged umbra]

@drifting walrus actually just make an unpitched version

underworld is e minor and touch trhe sky is a# minor

[drifting walrus]

sure

[distant forge]

A# minor?

Only post-chorus or what part has vocal key?

[rugged umbra]

assuming ts refers to da instru

[distant forge]

Oh, the end is vocal key

[distant forge]

(“I’m sky high” part)

[rugged umbra]

oh yeh it is

[drifting walrus]

before I resubmit does this sound alright

[distant forge]

But I’m not sure about post-chorus

[rugged umbra]

remove the im sky high

it has vocal key

[drifting walrus]

oh alright

[rugged umbra]

the very end

[distant forge]

Nah, probably not

[distant forge]

So basically only the end of the song has vocal key? I’m pretty sure what verses and chorus are keyless.

[rugged umbra]

tyhink so

[drifting walrus]

so

this should be fine if i were to resubmit

[rugged umbra]

sync and mixing issues

[distant forge]

Why that “taking back to the club” part sounds so off

Never mind, the whole first verse sounds bad

[drifting walrus]

i'll work more on this tomorrow cause tbh I just can't be bothered to fux those yet

lol

[sweet ermine]

Guys