♬ The Living Tombstone - I Can't Fix You x Eminem - Discombobulated

[edgy cypress]

Anathema by nikroplays

Song: The Living Tombstone - I Can't Fix You x Eminem - Discombobulated
Level ID: 112313819
Downloads: 728688
Song ID: 717444
Song URL: https://www.newgrounds.com/audio/listen/717444
Thumbnail: https://i.ytimg.com/vi/c8Ma7oi2ow8/mqdefault.jpg
Notes: ts song sucks MASHUP-WISE (some ppl will miss that, im lwk just praying ts is good enough)

-# Submission ID: 6951836a689a52b60f4933d8
-# Status: Rejected

[dawn fjord]

i think this should be onbar, but idk

also ts is a full song mashup

[shadow loom]

Forgot what I’m saying, fuck, I’m just discombobulated 🔥

Cool mashup, but chorus sounds bad imo. Sounds like offsync, but it’s not.

[shadow loom]

And btw, I don’t like these cuts, like, first of all, I don’t think what “Forgot what I’m saying, fuck, I’m just discombobulated” sounds good twice, I think it would be better if Discombobulated was paused at this transition.

• That transition from chorus to 2nd verse sounds very awkward, I think it would sound better without this “no”

[rapid snow]

Anathema new meta

[dawn fjord]

i wanted to make an icfy mashup for a while

[dawn fjord]

well when it says "im discombobulated" it starts the chorus mid "discombobulated" with "now up is down" so i couldnt rlly do exactly that. i could make it only be one "Forgot what I’m saying, fuck, I’m discombobulated", but not at the transition. for the 2nd one, i think i can get rid of the "no"

[dawn fjord]

so like this?

keep in mind of the msg above

[dawn fjord]

missed the 2nd "no" + tried to make the choruses sound better

[shadow loom]

Well, yeah, you’re right

[shadow loom]

Yeah, now it sounds good

But idk about the chorus, it sound strange, but it sounds like that in original song (if I remember correctly)

[prime trout]

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