mu some manga pages

[vagrant pagoda]

These some panels of my manga which I maked
still i didn't even draw one page of episode 3

[blissful silo]

@namaste. warned

Reason: Emoji Spam
Duration: 5 days

[loud crypt]

Is it just me or the grammar is a bit off in some dialogues? example “After my parent’s death I just have you who’s love me the most” I think something like “After my parent’s death I just have you, who loves me the most” is better and “stay here I do” (I didn’t get what that meant) or in the intro panel “my husband( ‘s) name is Vivek” or “we have been friends since school time” (were Anna chahiye) also in the illness line it should be something like “My husband was diagnosed with leukemia.He had 4 months of his life and this is my story.” Also,2 monthes later nahi months,just some advice and stuff but the art is goated though,I like your art style vrom🔥 🗣️

[vagrant pagoda]

Okay 👍 buddy mybe I must be talk about it with my friend cause he said it's fine sab thek lekha hai. Chinta Mt kr
He is the one who's wrote this all 🐭

Btw art by me and my friend is not good editor with his grammar

[loud crypt]

Bery talented editor ,suggestion de raha hu ki jab wo dialogues bheje to unhe ekbar Grammarly or quillbot per check ker Lena to see if the grammar and language are right or not

[novel hazel]

Bro that's amazing