Story Snippets!

[solar narwhal]

Pin's so cute

So curious

[swift solstice]

yesss he's so curoius and gentle!!

love how respectful he is of Spring's cues too

oh, you wanna go? okay. oh, you're scared? okay okay sorry for that, im gonna go, see you!

[north girder]

Yeah!! He has a live and let live attitude toward animals. Curious but respectful.

[swift solstice]

do love the idea of him just, leaving food for birds and strays, and watching them from a comfy distance

[north girder]

Yesss agreed. I hc him as very serious and responsible, so he would want to do it properly and safely. With minimal disturbance to the animals

[reef pagoda]

Pino's probably the kind of person birds would feel safe to land on

[swift solstice]

jhahjdbjahwdwa honestly, yeah xD

but only after some dessensitizing, birds are very skittish

except tits. those guys know no fear.

or cardinals

bold bastards lololol

[north girder]

P just standing so still for so long, one lands on him.

[swift solstice]

yessss

[north girder]

Someone approaches and it flies away. He just looks after it like :(

[swift solstice]

"oh.... you spooked them....."

[reef pagoda]

Pigeons...and more importantly....Geese

Seagulls too, Those guys would fight god given the chance

[swift solstice]

well, pigeons are a feral species, they are bred to be okay being around us uwu

and unless P somehow had food on or anywhere near his person, i doubt a seagull would bother xD

[north girder]

Slight tangent to this topic, but I think P would really like bugs.

[swift solstice]

YESSSSS

[north girder]

Particularly the “creepy icky” ones people generally dislike

Bro would love an ant farm. I just know it

[swift solstice]

ough, i rly need to do a piece of P appreciating the cicadas and fireflies

[north girder]

Yesssss omg id cry

[swift solstice]

oh darm we're on snippets, maybe move to HCs? xD

[reef pagoda]

I really wanted to include a goose in this fic but ughhh I already have a bird in there and I don't want to repeat

There's going to be a rat, bird, horse, fox, bear, penguin and ....reptile

A 3rd bird seems repetitive

[swift solstice]

a... penguin? where does he find a penguin? ajhwbbjabdw

[reef pagoda]

You'll see

[swift solstice]

........is he robbing a zoo?

[warm pendant]

Work’s been so slow lately. I minus well share a snippet of Chapter 2 that I begin working on today.

[reef pagoda]

I'm so curious about that Ergo she has with her

[warm pendant]

I’m sure most are. Without spoiling much, let’s just say the Ergo associates with a relative of hers, who’d worked with the alchemists and it was gifted on her birthday (After a tragic accident & her parents finding out she’s a Listener.)

I’ll have to do some more planning and stuff, which I have plans for in later chapters.

[north girder]

Oh yay!! Are we gonna find out who the person in the ergo necklace is?? 👀 I’ve been waiiiiting 🫶

[warm pendant]

Hehe yes, you will. Thats the little hint I’m giving you all until then. 🫶

[reef pagoda]

I'm only like...15% done with my first draft and it's already over 1400 words. Ahhh...editing is not going to be fun

[solar narwhal]

I enjoy using that imagery too @north girder

[solar narwhal]

The more I write the more I find myself loving to use imagery and metaphors

[swift solstice]

yesss it gives so much depth to writing!

or at the very least paints a more emotional picture of the scene and emotions of the characters, it brings you in closer <3

[solar narwhal]

I have a google doc with my friend where I upload the story so far for him, and before we headed off the other night, he teased me about replacing a character
Me: Don't you dare! This story is my child!

[swift solstice]

jbajdbawahdbw okay but i'd be so grumpy about that--

like bro don't even joke about that

[solar narwhal]

He's harmless, he just said it for my reaction

He's basically my brother

ngl Imma be sad when I actually finish it

I have others in my head but this one is super special

[swift solstice]

oh i get you, we all have our babies uwu

[solar narwhal]

It's like

https://tenor.com/view/pizza-invader-zim-i-made-it-myself-gif-5102420

[swift solstice]

hjadjhabjdhwa

yeah!

[north girder]

i love a good sunshine blorbo :3 this is so cute! they're so in love

[solar narwhal]

I'm glad you're enjoying!

P's the best boyfriend anyone could have

[small spruce]

I haven’t seen anyone else use Pin as a nickname before but it’s super cute!

[solar narwhal]

Thanks!

[solar narwhal]

Rachel is one of a kind

[agile phoenix]

Do you remember how I mentioned my first idea that made my write a story n times longer that I thought it'll be?
I just found in my notes this, looks like I wrote it soon after having the idea as it's 3rd person pov.
Whoever wanted to read this warm moment... I'm sorry, it's just full of panic! 😄

[warm pendant]

It was stormy last night in the evening when I got home from work, but I managed to get a few hours of writing in before bed. Sophia is probably one of the most interesting female characters in the game, and I tried my best in writing her here.

It was also pretty fun writing Rhosyn’s reactions here.

[eager patrol]

asking yourself if you're tripping after seeing a random lady with blue hair seems like a valid reaction

[warm pendant]

Exactly 🤣

[steel osprey]

I can't stop, this in engraved into my skull

[late grail]

It’s Carlo’s fault for having such ruffleable hair

[north girder]

ahaha he's shorter. his hair is right there. perfect for a good ruffle. i get it, Romeo. i get it.

[north girder]

I like how Rhosyn notices that Sophia stands apart from the others in the hotel. She's there, visible to her, but it's distant and strange like she's not really there. She's "lost in her own world", and it's interesting to me that Rhosyn noticed that because of her Listener abilities.

[north girder]

awww P so scared of hugging, more than when he was fighting those monsters, because he's afraid of what? hurting her? His hands that only know violence and destruction are still learning the gentle touch of affection, and he's so afraid of hurting others. v.v

i think that's lovely, actually. something to be said about the way cycles of violence can be broken. it just takes effort

[warm pendant]

In the game, Sophia is like “ I just exist.” in the hotel. Like, imagine you’re in the same room and a random person telling you that you can only see her ‘cause of the ability you have. It’s like the goat and the “ Huh?” Cat meme. between these two, and it’s funny just picturing that.

https://youtu.be/B7aSDu6Qh6U?si=z-4bisVL4YiK_d-p

[north girder]

lolol real

especially since rhosyn doesn't seem to understand her powers much, yet?

[agile phoenix]

Your insight is so great. And I must say that I love how you think and analyse everyone's stories 😄
To be honest, I may use this 'only know violence and destruction' thing 😄
'Cause the very origin of this scene is much simpler - you've never experienced this. You don't know how to do this. Like riding a horse or bike for the first time is scary (maybe not the best examples). I, or P in this case, is more afraid of his inability to do this right. A girl misses her family and hopes to find some comfort. If P fails, the girl will be even sadder than she is now... (And then he feels like he failed to hug 'in a correct way' 'cause he was stiff like a tree, but for unknown reason the girl stops crying anyway. Why? I'll never know.)

[north girder]

so she's like ???wdym???

[warm pendant]

Exactly. 😂

[north girder]

aw thank you. I want everyone to feel like their hard work is acknowledged, so I try my best to read everyones creations. We all put so much effort and feeling into what we make. I want everyone to feel seen and heard. their work appreciated.

[eager patrol]

I can only react with emojis when I like something because I can never put into words what exactly I like about everyone's stories

[shut onyx]

I have the same issue BUT I have found a few ways to be better about it! I'm actually working on something to help out others who want to get better at commenting

[eager patrol]

[shut onyx]

I used to have the same issue with art as well, and it was easier to comment IRL because I could physically point at the Cool Part and make "!!!!!!!" noises. I have basically found a way to do something like that, but online, and in response to writing rather than art

[solar narwhal]

Carlo and P's hair IS very ruffleable

[north girder]

It's been a minute since I shared a solo piece. This is part of the same fic where Bellamy meets P, but a bit before that encounter. This right after he gets injured, and that flood of emotion that wills him to keep going. even in the face of seemingly hopeless odds. Injured and facing multiple puppets he can't hope to kill. he knows he's in a bad spot. and misses his love (who has disappeared)

[shut onyx]

Despair and guilt is one hell of a combination...

[north girder]

YEAH T-T

he's feeling a lot

[eager patrol]

there's no peace in krat fr

[north girder]

the song you shared that reminded you of nico/bellamy actually played nonstop while i worked on this. idk if that vibe carries through it. somber and wistful. but even as it's sad, there's so much love there.

Even now, in this despair, he loves puppets. and it kills him that he doesn't understand what caused this. if he might have been able to prevent this.

[reef pagoda]

One of the special privileges you get when you're Romeo

[gusty fiber]

love the descriptions of the environment here, i think its a nice way to show bellamy's interior reflected in the exterior world of the story ;--;

[north girder]

Thank you T-T I appreciate you 🫶 yeah he’s not doing well. The strain of the frenzy is getting to him

[timid cloud]

Wow… love this so far.
You have done an amazing job at describing things such as character’s thoughts and emotions as well as the environments

And poor guy 😭 hope he’s doing alright

[north girder]

thank you friend!!! He's going through a rough time, but he'll be okay! While running away, P shows up and saves him. And depending on the timeline, Bellamy meets their beloved Nico in varying states of "okay" or not.

[timid cloud]

Yea. You seem quite experienced How long have you been writing?
And I’m glad to hear he starts to feel better: D

[north girder]

I've been writing on and off for years, but my improvement was not linear. I dont really know else how to explain it. Reading the writing of those I admire helps a lot! I try to pay attention to how it makes me feel, and how they managed to do that, so that I can then try to do that in my own stuff. It doesn't always work, but I learn something from the effort. I still feel like I have a lot to learn just like anybody else, but thank you for the compliment!

[solar narwhal]

Dang Potato 😭

(I always iamgine your name says that, so XD)

[timid cloud]

Ah I see.
Been writing for years? That’s dedication and it really shows friend. I can tell you’re experienced because have a lot of knowledge and writing advice.
I see what you mean and I agree that reading and really paying attention to other people’s work can help you improve on your own.
And yea as a writer it is good to be able to go back and redo certain things. I rewrote my first story Ruins of Farice twice before getting results I was actually proud of.
Doing great friend appreciate you: D

[north girder]

thank you!!! 🥺 editing is tough!! T-T you get attached to things, but yeah it's good to change things sometimes. thank you for reading! i appreciate that a lot!

[timid cloud]

Of course love to read your stuff.
And I’m very glad found a community that is as passionate about writing as I am

[north girder]

lol yes it's a play on the word potato, so you're not wrong (and also a guide so that people pronounce my name, Teo, correctly lol)

[steel osprey]

Started a new fic cuz of a sudden random burst of inspo came shining down upon me but– WHO TF IS CAROL AND WHY R THEY TRYING TO REPLACE CARLO???? 😭😭😭😭

[north girder]

Google docs is like that. It once tried to change the world “salve” to “slave” 😭😭😭

[steel osprey]

Salve is a slave to society. Ty Google Docs for raising awareness 🙏🙏🙏

[north girder]

Us wrangling Google doc like Ron Swanson “I know more than you.” Hush google doc

[timid cloud]

Lmfao i know this all to well

My main characters name keeps changing

Name was Seledor but it wanted me to correct it to Seller

[dark cobalt]

Ron Swanson would never use Google docs. Or Google anything.
But yeah, it's especially annoying when it's trying to correct your grammar and you're just "No, I'm not trying to be concise, I'm trying to be flamboyant. Now shut up."

[steel osprey]

Google Doc: You don't name the character, I do.

[timid cloud]

This

[north girder]

Google said, this name is too ethnic, have you considered this, instead?

[dark cobalt]

I've had to click "add word to dictionary" too many times.

[timid cloud]

Can’t wait for google to ruin the scene where my protagonist meets her brother again after five years because his name is Valsendrake and that is just not a word 💀

[steel osprey]

"No, I did not spell that wrong. That's just how it's spelled."

Google: Well, it's wrong

[timid cloud]

Google knows better than us writers apparently

[north girder]

except for when it's right and you realize you've been mispronouncing a word for eveeerr

my spirit died a little

[timid cloud]

“We could not find a name in the English language that is like this therefore it must be wrong”

[timid cloud]

Me with Valsendrakes name for a while because I’m dumb lmfao

Idk how I was pronouncing it but it was not the correct way

[reef pagoda]

My google docs keeps changing Carlo to Carl because of the BlazBlue fanfics I wrote

[eager patrol]

p out here hacking google docs

[solar narwhal]

Carol would be his girl name

Or Carly

[steel osprey]

Or Carla

[eager patrol]

carla and juliet

[solar narwhal]

Carla of the Bells

Instead of Carol

[north girder]

aw it's sweet that Gemini asked P to be left with Antonia. He's worried about her v.v I wonder what they chatter about.

[solar narwhal]

Gem is a real gem

[reef pagoda]

I did itttt chapter 1 of the comedy fic is done.

Thank you @fleet oasis for the burst of cute rat vids that gave me that needed push to get the chapter done today

[late grail]

Google docs is its own beast with trying to correct things I write. But then Grammarly — oh boy. I’ve had some funny things happen with that lmao. The best example I can give tho is from a nsfw fic I wrote so I won’t share details. All you need to know is that it tried to correct “Would you carry me?” To “Would you marry me?” -wheeze-

[north girder]

oooo yeah. i've heard grammarly isnt really...reliable anymore. the AI recommendations are not good. v.v RIP

[late grail]

A lot of them (for the free version anyway) are fine, just gotta read it over and make sure it makes sense. I often ignore a lot of its suggestions because it’s always trying to make dialogue into more “proper” English with proper grammar and everything. I like to use it tho to help the flow and little things here and there.

I have never once paid for the premium and I never used it. I’ve only ever just went along with the free version.

Like I said, it mostly just doesn’t register dialogue so it keeps trying to correct it, but other than that, I find it’s good for what I use it for

[north girder]

understandable tbh. iirc, they were designed for help with academic essays and the like? but yeah im sure they're still helpful for creative writing!

[late grail]

Yee that’s what it’s advertised for. I use it creatively and so, it’s really a matter of which grammar rules I want to break for the sake of the story and word flow

It does also keep trying to correct brunet to brunette when I learned that brunet is masculine and brunette is feminine. I really just need to add it to my dictionary at this rate lol

[north girder]

yeah!! creative writing is knowing the rules, so then you know which ones to break for Style™️

[fleet oasis]

You're welcome

[reef pagoda]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/55736530

Here it is! Feel feel to leave any comments or feedback here or on AO3

[cold geyser]

Wow this is awesome! The way you communicate the emotion Bellamy is dealing with makes me feel like I'm right there

[north girder]

🥹 what if i cried. huh? im glad it made you feel something 🫶🏼

[solar narwhal]

I love this

[reef pagoda]

Oh no

I missed a typo!!

Time to crawl into a sewer and die

[solar narwhal]

Wait it wasdn't a typo?

I just thought you were doing the car meme xD

[reef pagoda]

It's a typo. Lol

[dark cobalt]

Now I'm picturing a crossover between Lies of P and Persona 5

[reef pagoda]

I don't have anyone to proofread so there's probably lots of typos

[solar narwhal]

If you're okay with one more spot of help

[reef pagoda]

Yeah?

[solar narwhal]

Did you meant "not"?

[reef pagoda]

Figures I missed that one too

Thanks.

[solar narwhal]

No problem

I usually only point stuff out if people are ok with it

[reef pagoda]

I actually appreciate that a lot.

[solar narwhal]

It was very cute ^^

was the rat Remmy?

[reef pagoda]

It's easy to skip over tiny stuff like that because your own brain fills in the gaps

Close, but it's a different rat

The soup is a clue

[solar narwhal]

I haven't read a lot of fairytales and other fiction that doesn't have to do with magic, so xD

But I lovew reading about Pino's love of animals

[reef pagoda]

I can DM you the answer if you want

[solar narwhal]

And when I read about his plead for forgiveness, I was like, yep, that'd win me over too

Nah it'sw ok

[reef pagoda]

It's thanks to this server that I got the idea for this fic

[solar narwhal]

I'm happy I get to share my fic with other lop lovers, too

[reef pagoda]

Y'all inspired me with talk of what sort of animals P would like as a pet or in general

[solar narwhal]

Have you seen the neko P mod?

[reef pagoda]

I put Carlo on the opposite end though. He has nothing against animals, but they give him hell

Neko P mod 👀

[reef pagoda]

Okay that's cute AF

[warm pendant]

So cute

[north girder]

ooo i remember owen is your OC. He's an apprentice for a rival/former associate of Venigni, right? but who's cassandra? 👀

[ashen brook]

That's belong to chapter 5 when Owen meet Angelo

[vapid sparrow]

Omg! I'm literally squealing and kicking my feet! This is so good!!

[solar narwhal]

OMG thank you so much

I love it when others like my work

[warm pendant]

Dealing with writers block right now, so have another snippet of what I wrote last night. Honestly enjoyed writing this part with P here.

[vapid sparrow]

I like this alot, but I can't quite explain what I enjoy about it because sleepy brain! But, I will say that P's longing for a sibling and his desire to help the little girl whose missing her sibling is such a cute parallel. I want him to gain a brother or sister so badly. I just know he needs a hug and a friend

[eager patrol]

everyone making ocs for p to give him a big family

I have a carlo prototype he is never gonna meet but it's the thought that counts 😔

[warm pendant]

Thank you! When writing this, I thought about him and Carlo twin AU stuff. It had me wonder P wanting that type of affection - family at that. I too want him to gain a sibling. He deserves all the hugs and a good friend like Gemini. Including good-hearted person like my OC Rhosyn in my fanfic.

[warm pendant]

He deserves a big family, dang it! P deserves love!

[steel osprey]

FOUND FAMILY FOR THE WIN 💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖💖

[eager patrol]

p getting adopted by random survivors

yep, you're part of us now

[steel osprey]

https://cdn.discordapp.com/attachments/852843858923356172/1236612118925672448/I_love_P_sm_heart_watch.gif

[warm pendant]

The best story trope of all time IMO

[north girder]

awwww poor P really wants a family T-T he just wants to be loved 🧡

[warm pendant]

Indeed. He deserves it. All of it!

[eager patrol]

I say, give the puppet a family

https://tenor.com/view/aceattorney-phoenix-wright-evidence-papers-gif-10033464

[steel osprey]

So it is written

[reef pagoda]

Why is this so cute?

My heart can't take it

[north girder]

I love that Antonia is so shocked by Rachel's clothes. it is a bit of a scandal, especially since she's probably pretty old-school. A woman in trousers? What will youngsters do next~ lol This was very sweet. Antonia's phrasing at the end is really interesting to me. It implies she has had previous loves in the past (of course, that's reasonable tbh). Do you have any headcanons about that that you'll be including in the fic? 👀

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/diabetes-intensifies-gif-22401839

[solar narwhal]

I did start thinking about that actually after I wrote it. Initially I was t hinking about how she told P that line in the game, but then I'm like 'hmmm, i could flesh this out a bit if I want'

Maybe as a side story

I do have an idea about like a final story that takes place later on down the road

[solar narwhal]

and actually her shock is 'cause she's a smart old lady, figuring out thenon-dress meant she gon patrol with her man

[north girder]

yeah! both are pretty shocking lol

[solar narwhal]

Girl's gotta have some real practice some time 🦾

[north girder]

im a sucker for forehead kisses it's true. I think they're super cute

[solar narwhal]

Theyre super comforting

I can't not put a lot of that with these two. They're so in love it just seems right ^^

[solar narwhal]

@north girder A peek into Rachel's backstory

We ALL need a P

[solar narwhal]

I remember you asked about her story when I started the fic

it was finally right

[north girder]

I liked the line about P feeling as if his mechanical heart would break in two. It was so vivid. Poor Rachel, but at least she has her friends and beloveds :))

[solar narwhal]

She's SO lucky to have P

My heart melts writing about how sweet he's become

And it's all thanks to her

[ashen brook]

Not me bro I need an O

[eager wadi]

I should add this to my Excerpts of UNTOLD channel, but it’s just two little snippets from the first of my UNTOLD short stories, The Father’s Story, in which the reader will look in-depth into different time intervals of Guiseppe Geppetto’s life Uni until the point of the main story

My writings not as perfect but I hope it’s legible to read these snippets.

[reef pagoda]

Here's a snippet from my draft of chapter 2

The next animal will be a bird and Romeo will make his appearance too

[ashen brook]

Don't worry about it no one is perfect

[reef pagoda]

Carlo to the bird: You better not fucking die cuz if you do, Pino's going to be sad

Spoiler: the bird is fine

[ashen brook]

The bird is that a code between this lover I mean Carlo and romeo

[eager patrol]

don't have pino find out about hamsters

[reef pagoda]

No, it's a literal bird

[ashen brook]

Oh my bad

[reef pagoda]

The animals are references to animal characters in other literature, but it's just a light and silly story in the end.

If you want stressi depressi then I have a different fic in the works

[solar narwhal]

Pay no mind to the smol typo thing

[reef pagoda]

Wait, Akeela is this a sequel to the fic you have on AO3? The one with 12 chapters?

[solar narwhal]

It's not done yet

Ik it says completed, that's why I put the note up there at the beginning, saying i have more chapters up my sleeve

I'm THIKING it might be closer to 17-20, but idk,

[reef pagoda]

Oh so, it's going to be all in 1 and not split up into separate posts?

I'll be honest, I kind of binge read your entire fic because I've been awake since midnight so I might not have thoroughly read all the notes.

[solar narwhal]

I've been waiting to update it til I get one whole chapter done

imo I think my summaries kidna suck but hey XD

[reef pagoda]

I normally use a small excerpt of the first chapter as a summary because I'm not good at wrinting those

[solar narwhal]

That's a g ood idea

I do that with my videos, sorta

[reef pagoda]

Trying to pic out a short but intriugin enough section is hard though

[solar narwhal]

Anyweay I put up ch13

[reef pagoda]

[solar narwhal]

I hope you've enjoyed it so far

[reef pagoda]

I'm liking it

[solar narwhal]

I get caught up in writing the romance xD

[reef pagoda]

I think my favorite part was when Rachel heard piano in the middle of the night

[solar narwhal]

Yeah I really liked that part too

it all plays out like an anime in my head as I write

[reef pagoda]

As someone who prefers the solitude and isolation of night and even worked night shift for several years, that really hit the spot

I'd go as far to say that that specific scene wouldn't have felt the same if it was the middle of the day

[solar narwhal]

not at all

the night is the most romantic settings too imo

perfect for discovering feelings

[reef pagoda]

Ohh I'm on a roll or something. I might have the bird chapter done sooner than I thought

[steel osprey]

You might wanna atleast make that known in general so that it wouldn't mess with people's filters when they want to see completed works.

You can do that by typing a question mark or an estimated number in the 2nd box under Chapter Number. It was also listed when you started a new work under the "This work has multiple chapters" check box.

Doing this would let your readers know that it's still getting updates so that they can subscribe to your work and get notified when a new chapter is released. Marking it as complete would let them think that it is already completed.

[solar narwhal]

OOOH

the ?

thank you~

I almost did that

I thought you HAD to have a number, ty~!

I see, cool!

I honestly didnt know people used the filter for completed work, i'd never done this site before, so

Also ty for explaining then, not just being like "You might wanna change that thhen" and leaving it there

[small spruce]

Starting a story based off of some of @north girder ‘s prompts - relationships deepening as humanity grows/P discovers he has a favorite thing

[warm pendant]

A03 is complicated, but once you get the hang of it, it's pretty easy. @solar narwhal

[north girder]

wahhhh im excited to see how this dynamic develops!!! AUGH P thinking about how he would kill her if necessary, because he's still not "awake" enough to think for himself or feel personal affection. That broke my heart in a good way 🥲 I also really like Eugenie asking him such a... personal question? One he didn't understand. It will be cool to see a contrast later if she asks him a similar question, but at that point he will have an actual answer for her.

[small spruce]

Yeah I’ve only written post canon fic so far so it hurts to write low-humanity P! but it’ll be worth it once the scene is contrasted with high-humanity P and he can reflect on his growth 🥹

[solar narwhal]

It personally hurt ME to read beginning canon P

Esap since mine is VERY contrasted

[north girder]

yes!!!! im definitely invested in seeing the rest of this! 🫶🏼

[small spruce]

Your P is the sweetest cinnamon roll 💕

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/cinnamon-rolls-cinnamon-roll-sending-hugs-sending-love-spread-gif-24801640

(I like the show you guys some of the serious excerps to show that I'm not just full of fluff )

Even tho it IS mostly fluff

[ashen brook]

Finally finished the chapter 3 just cleaning some mistake and fixing some grammar problems

[vapid sparrow]

I'm loving this so far! Canon P before he begins to develop his own ideals is so interesting to see, particularly the way he thinks. It's so simple, a puppet obeying a command, and yet he does have his own rationale even though, right now, it's simply tied to Gepetto's desires. I can't wait to see him develop his own desires

In the meantime, I'm writing a story where P is navigating the heavier emotions: depression, heartache, despair, and learning how to cope with his pain. While he is currently making terrible decisions (some of which I can't share because it's nsfw, or it's just really dark) he will eventually find his voice in the darkness, and claw his way into the light. At least, that's what I'm hoping to express. ^^

[small spruce]

Ooh that sounds like a really interesting concept. I do love a story that goes through some dark parts but ultimately has a happy ending. I’m looking forward to reading if/when you have something to share!

[vapid sparrow]

Sorry I keep jumping all over the place in my story. I wanted to share more of the first chapter but felt it was a bit too dark to post here. Then I ended up completely changing the second chapter which I shared previously. And now the snippet I'm sharing is from chapter 3 lol. Just finished writing this small flashback to when P and Romeo were kids. I find it funny how it was raining as I wrote a scene that takes place in the rain. xD Anyway, hope you enjoy ^^
P.s. probably some mistakes, I haven't done a deep edit on it yet.

[late grail]

Y’all can have a little taste of my mer au with mer P hatching. it’s best if you don’t ask how they did it lol there’s more in my little corner

[vapid sparrow]

This is so precious!

[north girder]

Oh this is so darling. Poor P. He was too good at hiding that no one could find him T-T so he felt abandoned. Poor little guy

[north girder]

Ooo yesss I saw this in your forum! Very cute!

[late grail]

uwu

[late grail]

Aaa poor baby! 🥺

[warm pendant]

I’m making progress, but this is the only snippet I have to share for now.

[dark cobalt]

I've got something just about ready to be shared, so here's a little teaser.

[north girder]

Oooooo is this when Arlecchino murders Venigni’s family? 👀

[dark cobalt]

Yes, indeed.

With some build up and aftermath, as well.

[north girder]

Cool!! I’m looking forward to reading it :))

[small spruce]

Oh nooo, poor P. The idea of hiding so well no one finds you has got to be one of the scariest yet harmless things for a kid 😭

[small spruce]

I’m all about more Arlecchino explorations, looking forward to this one! Hopefully the rhymes aren’t too hard to write 😆

[dark cobalt]

They were a bit of a challenge, but I think I'm proud of what I've come up with.

[reef pagoda]

Gimme strength, y'all. I'm trying to finish the first draft of the bird chapter in my fic by noon and it's already 10:30AM

[vapid sparrow]

You can do it!!

[north girder]

Yeah! It’s tough, but I think you managed to capture his energy. The rhymes are a little cheesy in game, but in a fun way! I like to think he does it on purpose. An extra layer of like… mockery.

[dark cobalt]

I do think I managed to get the right amount of cheesiness with the rhymes.

[north girder]

Yeah! I enjoyed it

[reef pagoda]

Progress is slow, but at least it's happening

[vapid sparrow]

This is so precious! Omg!

Ngl I looked up nightingale singing and Carlo's description is accurate lol

[reef pagoda]

Thanks! It was kind of hard finding the right words to describe the sound without writing an entire paragraph on its own

Carlo after hearing the bird

[agile phoenix]

While working on the chapter I was rereading dialogues and this part:
"I know that father wants Carlo, and that I have his heart, so I should give it so you two could be happy together, but even if I did it, Carlo wouldn't come back."
made me came up with a fic idea, and since I'll never write it, I can at least tell it. 😄

Carlo and Pinuś are sons of Geppetto. Poor Pinuś has a heart disease and Carlo is a perfect in everything, strong young man. For that reason Geppetto loves Carlo, his amazing son, and not really care about Pinuś.
And... Carlo has an accident and dies! T-T And then his heart heart is given to Pinuś, for sure surgery like that should be possible nowadays. And Geppetto is like: 'Why it wasn't you? Why was Carlo the one to die?! Give me back my son!'

What an idea, I surprised myself! T-T

[solar narwhal]

I just uploaded ch14 to my ao3, but here's an excerpt of it ^^

[vapid sparrow]

P struggling with his humanity is so real. Don't we all, buddy! Don't we all! I love that he reminds himself of all the good things he's experienced too. It's something I need to get better at to be honest. Congrats on 14 chapters! That's such a major accomplishment!!

[solar narwhal]

Thank you! I'll upload 15 soon, and am working on 16!

Crud a made a typo

[reef pagoda]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/55736530/chapters/141886954

Chapter 2 is done~

https://tenor.com/view/hadeel928-motorcycle-go-happy-دراجة-gif-26885429

Your feedback is always appreciated. Also tell me I'm not crazy for writing about how nice Spring smells.

I swear cats have like...this special nice smell that humans find soothing and I wanted to include that but maybe I'm just nuts

[vapid sparrow]

You're not crazy lol. I love when my cat goes outside and has this nice fresh air scent. I can't describe it. But it's nice. Include the scent! Lol if you feel comfortable doing so

[warm pendant]

Got some writing stuff in before I go to bed for the night.

[vapid sparrow]

I love the way you write, Frisk! So captivating. ^^

[warm pendant]

Thank you

[solar narwhal]

MORE SWEETNESS

[cinder kelp]

It's been so long since I ever wrote something it feels refreshing

P is just feeling gay guys

[solar narwhal]

Apparently I shoulda waited t o post mine then...

[cinder kelp]

I was just reading through this and P saying mon amour

[solar narwhal]

I love how he calls her "my love" all the time

[cinder kelp]

Also Sorry if I posted over yours I didn't mean to do that

[solar narwhal]

Oh no it's okay, it was jusdt such a sudden turn xD

You sayin he's feelin gay after a post sweet romance between my couple XD

[cinder kelp]

I should've put that it's a joke 😭 I'm not writing a ship fic

[solar narwhal]

Well now I'm relieved

But anyay ye it's okay, hopefully people will see both

[cinder kelp]

Can i get tagged when you finish yours

I'm in for P calling endearments

[solar narwhal]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/55537669/chapters/140947612

[cinder kelp]

OH YAY

[solar narwhal]

I'll post the whole chapter here when I'm done ^^

there's a butt ton of endearments and fluff

[cinder kelp]

I love fluff tysm 🙏

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/lies-of-p-pinocchio-liar-gif-9388849607094143938

[vapid sparrow]

this is so precious! Omg! I love how sweet and tender they are with each other!

[solar narwhal]

I LOVE writing about them

19th century cory and topanga

Pino is legit the sweetest ever

[reef pagoda]

Chapter 3's animal will be a horse.

Screenshot cut off the rest, oops

Inspired by this meme

[steel osprey]

P is a Disney princess at this point

[reef pagoda]

I mean....if him helping a bird be Romeo's literal wingman in ch.2 wasn't confirmation, kids crowding him and calling him a prince charming with a horse is

[cinder kelp]

This is exactly the meme that came to my head

[vapid sparrow]

This made me laugh so hard. xD I'd love to read more of this when you're willing to share.

[viscid dew]

This is a part 2 of something I posted a while ago.. I kinda forgot I wrote it and it's still in rough draft, but I thought it was adorable and would rather share it and it's mistakes then wait and forget

Little bit of personal Romeo lore tease? I mean— shhh...

I also still live by the chatterbox Romeo hes so 🥹

[solar narwhal]

I freaking love how innocent he acts He's so adorable

[solar narwhal]

Pino def has Spencer energy

IK y'all like my fluff, so here ya go

@cinder kelp

[cinder kelp]

P is so nice at comforting it makes me cry

[warm pendant]

No big paragraph to share, but I took my hands writing the main lady of the hotel.

[cinder kelp]

Did he learn how to call her petnames by just learning somewhere?

[solar narwhal]

He reads a ton

[cinder kelp]

I trust his vocabulary

[solar narwhal]

And since theyre in France, he speaks a lott of french

Mainly towards her, cause language of love (Also the fact she's mainly the only one he talks to, besides Antonia and a V some

He learns a lot about human emotions from Antonia

She's like a grandmother to him

[cinder kelp]

I'm glad I'm not the only one who thought of that

[solar narwhal]

She also acts as Rachel's too

And helps them both realize their feelings and helps them realize it's okay to be with each other as human and puppet

[cinder kelp]

@steel osprey @fleet oasis

[fleet oasis]

When your dad would want it.

That's one way to end it lol

[cinder kelp]

He'd never

[fleet oasis]

Hahaha

I know

I'm joking

[steel osprey]

I can hear gemini so clearly man

[solar narwhal]

P felt yyik because of this

[cinder kelp]

Awesome I love gemini

As a member in the genshin community gemini is a refreshing companion compared to paimon

[fleet oasis]

I wish I could like him. I get he's helping but I just got annoyed by him. I felt bad

[solar narwhal]

We all stan Gem

Ok obviously not

[fleet oasis]

🫣

Sorry

Not sorry

[solar narwhal]

[fleet oasis]

Val was never heard from again

[reef pagoda]

Thankies. There's 2 chapters up on AO3 already if you haven't seen.

[reef pagoda]

Spencer? Who's that?

[solar narwhal]

The guy in that gif

[reef pagoda]

Ohhh. Okay

[solar narwhal]

Ye it's from an old show

[reef pagoda]

I only knew it as a meme, lol

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/omg-really-no-shout-scream-gif-16852985

From a show called iCarly

[vapid sparrow]

Oh really? I'll look into it then! Thanks!

[reef pagoda]

It's called Our House is Not a Zoo.

[solar narwhal]

More realizations

[reef pagoda]

Dang, that last line is fire

[vapid sparrow]

This hurts my heart! Poor P, but at least he's realizing the truth instead of continuing to live in delusion.

[solar narwhal]

And it's all thanks to her

[reef pagoda]

How in the hell did I reach 2000 words for the horse chapter when I struggled to reach 1000 with the bird.

I feel like sometimes there's phantom words or something making certain chapters feel longer than others

[solar narwhal]

Some of my chapters are 3 pages, the longest chapter is 8 iirc

It just depends I guess

[vapid sparrow]

Figured I should share this here, but I started working on a (hopefully) small story inspired by the Maid P that was shared in the art channel. Also used Poteoto's prompt list, particularly: P's favorite thing.
No idea where this is going. Lol

[solar narwhal]

Holy crap, I wonder how Creep's gonna react

[warm pendant]

Small snippet on my progress I made a couple days ago. I figure I share this before I head to bed. Chapter 2’s coming along.

[reef pagoda]

How many of y'all are the little girl who wants to marry Pino?

[steel osprey]

I'm the lil girl who'd trap him in tupperware and shake em up like some sort of shaker toy

[reef pagoda]

Kuruuuuu

[steel osprey]

I'm just a lil guy, c'mon leave me alone 🥺

[reef pagoda]

I like that I made P be some fairy tale prince in this chapter while Romeo and Carlo smoke on the porch like nicotine goblins

[steel osprey]

P IS a fairytale prince. Change my mind

[reef pagoda]

This made me think of the Magic 8 ball toy

Shake him hard enough and he'll give you an answer

[steel osprey]

That's what I'd do to my lil P!

Ask the lil guy a question and throw him around

[cinder kelp]

Donkeys istg

[cinder kelp]

I don't want to be the little girl I'd be so much more delighted to see that unfold and see how both the girl and Pino enjoy that moment because oh my god that's so wholesome

[reef pagoda]

Aww thanks. I'm still not used to writing wholesome or cute stuff, but I appreciate the encouragement

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/uhm-me-raise-hand-hi-nick-jonas-gif-16491413

If I can't have him, none of the children can

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/lies-of-p-gaming-gif-11591475648654979008

I mean I literally thought he was when I first saw him

[reef pagoda]

Seems I've unknowingly tapped into the fandom's subconsious then

[solar narwhal]

No, just me

[warm pendant]

I’ve wrote all day today……confident that I get the chapter finished. Have a snippet because my fingers hurt.

[timid cloud]

Ahh they’re to cute

[warm pendant]

Thank you!

[timid cloud]

You’ve been working on writing all day?

That is impressive

[warm pendant]

My lower back ached and I was exhausted from yesterday. So, good opportunity to spend the day. Plus, my mother had meetings on zoom for work so it also kept me occupied while having a document video or music in the background.

[timid cloud]

Ah I see

Feel you definitely had those days before

[reef pagoda]

Frisk, dearie, make sure to rest your hands. Soak them in a bowl of warm water if your fingers are still hurting.

[steel osprey]

What a good day to summon demons

[reef pagoda]

Kuru, have you ever watched Buzzfeed Unsolved? Because this totally reminds me of Shane and Ryan

[steel osprey]

OMG YES I LOVE THAT SHOW

[reef pagoda]

My comrade! 🤝

Carlo is definitely Ryan in this

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/hagrid-harry-potter-shouldnt-have-said-that-whoops-robbie-coltrane-gif-5641488

[solar narwhal]

This is the most Kuru thing that's ever been written

[solar narwhal]

If P kissed my hand, I'd faint then and there

[warm pendant]

Won’t we all. 🥰

[solar narwhal]

He is SUCI a chivalrous gentleman

[warm pendant]

Agree and I love writing him like one.

[solar narwhal]

My turn for some fluff (and sadness)!

[solar narwhal]

Same

[timid cloud]

Wrote this morning and have updated it a bit

“My precious Carolie.
I still love you. But I can no longer see you the same way after last night. I understand you had good intentions but it’s only caused my family more pain. Because of this we’ve made the hard decision to break contact with you entirely.
Carolie please don’t hate me.
I really do wish things could’ve been different
Sincerely ### ######”

Been thinking about it for a while but first time I’ve shared my writing here.

If you’d like to see more I can try to do better at sharing

[solar narwhal]

am intrigued

[timid cloud]

Oh Really?

Thanks

It’s for the story I started writing

This letter is related to the background of the MC Owlette

If you’re curious to learn more I’ve actually have written quite a bit about them in this server here’s a thread with some information about them #1234392713009561620

[solar narwhal]

I'm re-doing a lot of my story summaries and ao3 and I'm over here fangirling over my fic 😭

[eager patrol]

we are so back

[solar narwhal]

Friendzoned?

[eager patrol]

just hesitant

[solar narwhal]

Of course he's hesitant

[solar narwhal]

First crushes are hard too

[solar narwhal]

~~Also who in their right mind would frienzone such a sweetheart like Pino ~~

[solar narwhal]

@north girder Idk if you've read ch17 on ao3 yet but here's a lil insight on my Antonia

[eager patrol]

they're just both horrible at communication

[solar narwhal]

I feel it

Idk what I'd do if Pino confessed to me

Of course, I'm also shy in nature

[steel osprey]

I need Google Docs to stop trying to make Romeo assure me when Carlo's over there scared af

Even in my other wip fic too like- am I third wheeling or is Carlo third-wheelin

[solar narwhal]

I''M CACKLING\

Rom be breakin the 4th wall

[reef pagoda]

You exist in the story as the old crone wearing a cloak who sits in the corner and narrates

Or maybe you're the camera crew and this is like The Office. idk

[cinder kelp]

Look at your kurudoll and ask if he knows what you feel

[steel osprey]

No

he looks angry in this angle omg wtf 😭

Anyways, stupid idiots

[cinder kelp]

SPECTER??

Im cackling

[steel osprey]

summoning ghosts is such a good excuse for me to summon in a specter

imagine just preparing to help a puppet fight a boss only to be transported way back in the past

[reef pagoda]

What's worse, another boss fight? Or dealing with Carlo and Romeo being little menaces?

[solar narwhal]

They sound so much like brothers

[solar narwhal]

Yes

[vapid arrow]

I would love to have a flashback of Sophia having to deal with those two menaces

[solar narwhal]

[vapid sparrow]

This is so precious! Omg!

[vapid sparrow]

A bit of a long snippet, but I had to share it! Promeo

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/controlmypc-cat-screaming-discord-gif-20582295

I'm not one for m/m but AHHHHH

NOCCHI OMG

Is it bad thatt I thought of the soup at olive garden, chicken n nocchi? XD

[vapid sparrow]

No, it's perfectly acceptable! xD

[solar narwhal]

XD

[eager patrol]

I will beat romeo up if he doesn't make up his mind

[timid cloud]

💀happens

[warm pendant]

PARKOUR!!

I also like to remind you Rhosyn jumped from one rooftop to the other side in boots like in the second pic for reference.

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/parkour-the-office-andy-bernard-gif-11765843

[solar narwhal]

Eugenie been cookin'

[vapid sparrow]

I love how she just flits across like it's nothing lol.

[vapid sparrow]

Venigni's gonna be upset he didn't come up with it first.

[warm pendant]

Lol she like “This is nothing. I got this.” Poor P.

[solar narwhal]

They workin together so

He did

[vapid sparrow]

Ah! Sorry it just seemed like Eugie did it on her own. But that makes sense.

[solar narwhal]

Nah no to be sorry

[vapid sparrow]

I'm just blind apparently xD

[solar narwhal]

Nah I didn't post it here

[vapid sparrow]

Oh okay!

[solar narwhal]

dw

[eager patrol]

https://tenor.com/view/let-her-cook-gif-3479906673053749087

[cinder kelp]

Little P drabble, this is the whole thing kdbfkdkf

I don't. Write that much

[vapid sparrow]

Please write more! It's so good!

[cinder kelp]

Will try :3c

Also. Carlo version

[warm pendant]

I'm gonna cry after those two snippets of yours. How you write is so good! Keept coming!

[cinder kelp]

Ill try doing more, thinking abt Sophia :3c

[warm pendant]

I'll be eager to see your take on Sophia when you do.

[agile phoenix]

Both are so amazing, thank you for sharing!

[solar narwhal]

Ugh I feel so deeply for this puppet

[solar narwhal]

This is so good too!

[solar narwhal]

FLUFFFFFFFFF
I've been waiting ever since I started writing this fic to write this scene

[warm pendant]

I screamed at this. The cuteness!

[solar narwhal]

This whole part I been working on since last night is by far my fave so far

wait til you read the next part

[small spruce]

These are both great but the one for Carlo is so evocative. I look forward to seeing more from you

[north girder]

Hey! Good to see you. How’s the P friendship fic with Eugenie going? 👀👀👀

[vapid sparrow]

squeals in delight! this is so cute!! Ah! I love how tender they are with each other!!

[solar narwhal]

I almost tagged you but I forgot xD

@warm pendant @vapid sparrow

[warm pendant]

AHHHH!!!! My heart!!! They're getting married!! They're getting a happy ending!!!

[solar narwhal]

Puppet boy is real man now

https://tenor.com/view/guh-gif-8902759962099812595

[small spruce]

😭 After that snippet I posted I got horrible writers block… I promise I’m working on it though 😭

[north girder]

No worries! Oh question, and it’s related to writing(creativity) but is it alright if I dm you about it??

[vapid sparrow]

Ahhhh! Omg! My heart! I can't take this it's too tender, too sweet! I legit almost cried! Ah! I love this for them! Thank you for sharing this!

[solar narwhal]

I was a little hesitant to share all three pics, but for some reason y'all love my fluff

And I guess in this day and age we all need a lil fluff

I love writing about their love

[small spruce]

I’m guilty of being an angst writer while also vicariously living through the fluff ❤️ it’s so cuuute

[solar narwhal]

Oh trust me, there's been a few chapters/scenes where my heart just BROKE while I wrote them

But, 'tis the life of a writer

[north girder]

Just tried but got an error message

[small spruce]

Yeah that’s totally fine!

[warm pendant]

Indeed. I'm still writing and brainstorming both fluff and angst stuff for my RP (Rhosyn/P) pair of mine. Lol Other characters included.

[north girder]

I tried 😅

[small spruce]

Might need to add as a friend first

[warm pendant]

I got some writing done this evening. I give you my take on the Ergo flower I came up with.

[vapid sparrow]

You had me at the flower. It sounds so pretty! Then you hit me in the feels with Carlo and Romeo 😭
I enjoyed this snippet! Can't wait to read more

[vapid sparrow]

I wish I could share the full story but alas. Instead, enjoy this snippet! ^^ Promeo

[warm pendant]

Thank you! Glad you enjoyed it including my little flower concept. I will say, writing Carlo and Romeo was heartbreaking for me. 😭

I have ideas for them down the road.

[cinder kelp]

I'm in love with this concept!!! I'd love to know more abt ergo integrated with plants and flowers like these

[cinder kelp]

I'm giggling in joy for these two, I'd have cried too if I saw a play of a puppet getting decommissioned after it's been so well loved and cared for

Romeo's response feels comforting for P's answer too 😭

[warm pendant]

I’m glad you love the concept of the Ergo Flower! I’m brainstorming ideas for it, but I thought it be a neat idea an Ergo flower exists within Krat. ^ ^

[cinder kelp]

It makes me stim in joy thinking there's always more to Ergo

[warm pendant]

It’s early in the morning for me and this is already hitting my feels.

[cinder kelp]

Also I read Corya I cheer, I like her

I made Romeo's part now btw

I tried doing Sophia but I think I need to look more into her lore i feel like I only know half of her

[warm pendant]

I’m happy you like my girl Coyra.

[warm pendant]

I saw this on the other server and it had me heartbroken. (Again, I woke up). This perfectly explains how Romeo feels towards Geppetto.

Sophia is an interesting character on her own - I was on the same boat as you with her. I tried writing close to her character as possible with much that I could and understand about the blue butterfly.

[cinder kelp]

So far, I can only picture her relationship with P— but not her with the Alchemists, which for me is the most crucial part abt her, but I never got around to understand her lore about that part

[vapid sparrow]

"The fire was more merciful than your hands attempting to mend me" the imagery is intense. I loved this so much ah! More? Please?

[solar narwhal]

WHY YOU ALL SO TALENTED

https://tenor.com/view/controlmypc-cat-screaming-discord-gif-20582295

[cinder kelp]

Ragh this is the last thing I'll leave behind the docs. Gonna continue sometime.

(if you can access the docs don't read ch2 yet pls :'3c)

[solar narwhal]

I love how everyone descibes their writing about Pin

I DROWN IN ALL Y'ALLS TALENT

[warm pendant]

Still editing the chapter, but got a little RP down both last night & this evening.

[cinder kelp]

Oooh I feel like in our short time of roleplaying I'm missing out on how amazing you write the setting and the scenes— it's so immersive

I love the way you describe the situation they're in, it's so grim

Plus the touch that P has little clue about the city

He only knows his way around thanks to his father 😭

[warm pendant]

Hehe thank you. (Honestly, I've been caught with life and stuff had me forgot about the roleplay in the other server. )

Thank you for your kind comment. It means a lot. I try my best. I've had the thought of P at least only having a bit of knowledge of the city since Geppetto like....told him. Like, he woke up and doesn't know Krat.

[cinder kelp]

Most takes including me usually make P at least be familiar with it, so this is refreshing for me

also I completely forgot abt our rp too and my oc there is too outdated

[warm pendant]

I don't blame you. My main goal when writing P was to separate Carlo and P with Pino finding his own person - becoming a real boy. Still exploring the idea and brainstorming ideas. I'm glad you like my take on our lovable puppet boy.

Lol It's all good. Mainly I wanna try making my other OCs down the road when I do

[cinder kelp]

We can brainstorm together sometime :D

[warm pendant]

I'll take it in concertation but thank you for the offer. 🫶

[cinder kelp]

This is so heartwarming 🥹 P must've felt so big making the proposal happen ghucgjj

[solar narwhal]

They grow up so fast

Did you read the actual proposal up there?

Btw I know I post mostly the fluff here, but there ARE some heartbreaking moments in my cooking. I've poured my heart and soul into this fic

[cinder kelp]

I did, while reading it I felt kinda cloudy (great way!) in the sense that, yeah, this is such a huge moment, it's getting real and this part is a comforting sequence to it

[solar narwhal]

Our puppet is a real man now

I never wanted a scene to be so perfect 🥹

[ashen brook]

Sorry for the title

[warm pendant]

Made some more progress. Honestly happy how this turned out.

[solar narwhal]

Nice job

Did you type that on a phone???

I could never

Impressive

[warm pendant]

Thanks! No, I typed on the computer, and took a photo of my progress on phone. I can type on phone, but it’s just easier on PC.

[solar narwhal]

I thought it cause of the arrow thing on the side

Ohh I swe

You could just take a print screen if you want ^^ it takes a screenshot

I think you can do that anyway without a special program I can't remember

I have a program that I can use to take them so I can't remember

[warm pendant]

The arrow is actually the YouTube vid I had open. 😅

It’s much easier to take a screenshot on my phone since I have Google Docs on both my devices. But, I can try that in the future when I share another progress snippet of mine.

[solar narwhal]

Whatever works ^^ I like the image you did of the scene

I try to describe my scenes as best I can too

[warm pendant]

Thank you. I try my best to describe scenery in my writing, too.

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/ratchet-and-clank-ratchet-and-rivet-ratchet-rivet-dab-me-up-gif-27185020

[solar narwhal]

@warm pendant Since IK you have a really busy life, I'll post a snippet of the stab 😭

[warm pendant]

Oh my! This is so good and heartbreaking! Thank you for sharing!

[solar narwhal]

Thank you so much! And Of course Those 2 chapters (That one and the one after) were really emotional for me

Also this one was particularly heartbreaking for me too

[cinder kelp]

Is it harder to write with a phone?

[solar narwhal]

I'd probably make more typos than normal

And get overly agravated

[cinder kelp]

Ohhh that makes sense. Somehow I'm the complete opposite, I can't sit too long to write with a pc

[solar narwhal]

Really?

Back when I wrote chapter...7 I think it was, I legitt wrote for 4+ hrs straight

I was super excited to write it

it was one of my favorite dreams I had

[cinder kelp]

I don't always get to be on a pc and everything that I've written these past years was usually whenever I'm lightheaded or sleepy

And it's always on my phone

[solar narwhal]

AH I see~

i have a friend who said they were taught to keep like a journal at their bedside

[cinder kelp]

I love how different we are in getting motivated to write

[solar narwhal]

My motivation for this first fic was vivid dreams I had for around 2 weeks

[cinder kelp]

Oooh you get a lot of vivid dreams?

[solar narwhal]

On occasion

idk how it sparked my want to have an outlet for them

But it sure has helped

[cinder kelp]

And it's amazing to be able to write it

[solar narwhal]

I didn't dream every chapter either, mainly like meeting Pino and other scenes having to do wit him

And I dreamed a lot of them at least twice

[cinder kelp]

That's so cool ???

I rarely get dreams so I'm always impressed with ppl who get to dream like that

[solar narwhal]

It's very strange, but i wouldn't give up the experience I've had

It's been amazing

[steel osprey]

Dreams r so strange to me

Because if I ever get one, they end up being strangely bizarre

[solar narwhal]

cause yours are in jars

I'm sorry it just came out

[steel osprey]

Like LoP characters in a cooking show and Geppeto, Antonia and Venigni r the hosts and judges

[solar narwhal]

IMAGINE VENIGNI BEING A COOKING SHOW HOST

Holy heck

[steel osprey]

strange fascination comes with strange dreams indeed

The contestants were like... baking P cookies and Romeo's were a bit burnt and he got a scolding from Geppetto

Smth smth somehow the dream ended with P in the furnace

[solar narwhal]

*summons @jaunty berry *

You know the assignment

(We should prob take this to Lounge tho)

[steel osprey]

Just found a typo that said "thirty" instead of "thirsty"

Crazy how one letter can change so much

[solar narwhal]

at least Rom didn't assure you he was 30

This makes me think of this

https://tenor.com/view/shadow-faker-hedgehog-gif-26055337

[cinder kelp]

@solar narwhal this is how he talks to P

Arlecchino is nicer to P than whatever Eden is trying to do

[solar narwhal]

Dang son

[cinder kelp]

Capital M for mean...

He doesn't hate P, he loves the guy actually

[solar narwhal]

Me and Eden bout to through hands

[cinder kelp]

LMAO

[solar narwhal]

that's a weird way to show someone that

[cinder kelp]

Yeah it's his first to meet someone like P

"Puppet and human? Are you fr" says a 100+ old kid

[vapid sparrow]

This is such a fun scene! I love it!

[solar narwhal]

I just put up ch20 on my ao3 and I'm so excited to have people read it!

[warm pendant]

More Ergo Tulips lore for the night before I head off to bed. This chapter is coming along well, if I do say so myself.

[solar narwhal]

Mama's still cookin'

https://tenor.com/view/cook-chef-wok-saute-cooking-food-gif-16993886

[solar narwhal]

This is giving me ideas of my own too

I'm enjoying the story

[warm pendant]

I’m glad to hear that :3

[solar narwhal]

I'm writing the chapter where Rachel sings to P the song I wrote and I'm nervous

The song is diabeetus incarnant

[warm pendant]

You got this. I bet it'll be adorable

[solar narwhal]

He's very distraught and surprised that she wrote a song for him

I almost don't wanna do it it's so mushy

I can't let that stop me tho

[warm pendant]

What's stopping you?

Do it!

[warm pendant]

Waaa! This is adorable!!

[warm pendant]

Still cooking! Guess the game reference I wrote here.

Hint: “||Do you feel like a hero yet?”||

[cinder kelp]

I forgot to put here my piece abt Sophia

[vapid sparrow]

Started working on my fic for my OC Mouse, and look who popped up. x.x

[solar narwhal]

Some Sunday diabeetus fluff~

@warm pendant @vapid sparrow

[vapid sparrow]

So precious! I love these two soooo much!! Ah! Thanks for the fluff!

[warm pendant]

They’re such precious beans. Thank you for the fluff.

[solar narwhal]

My brain is like...96% fluff when I write about them\

[solar narwhal]

@vapid sparrow @warm pendant want some more?

IT'S FLUFFDAY

[vapid sparrow]

[warm pendant]

I love fluff day! Thank you for another meal!

[solar narwhal]

Imma head off, but before I do

@warm pendant

[warm pendant]

Cute! Thanks for the tag

[vapid sparrow]

Ahhh! The wedding is upon us! They're so cute little happy beans! I can't wait til he sees her walking down the aisle towards him.

[solar narwhal]

He's gonna be in such a puddle

[solar narwhal]

Found an ESQUISIT dress for her to wear

[solar narwhal]

@vapid sparrow @warm pendant

[vapid sparrow]

Awwwwwww. It's okay P, it's just one night, and then you two will be wed and spend the rest of your lives together! ^^

[solar narwhal]

His journey with so much inner confliction with being a puppet is heartbreaking

But he's risen to the occasion multiple times and comes oujt on top 🦾

[warm pendant]

Insert TF2 Solider laugh here

I’ve been cooking! Wrote down their interaction before relaxing my fingers.

(CW for carcasses)

[solar narwhal]

https://tenor.com/view/cooking-cook-chef-masterchef-lilb-gif-13910066

[solar narwhal]

My baby is too sweet for his own good

[warm pendant]

Agree

[solar narwhal]

IT'S HAPPENINGGGGGGG

@warm pendant @vapid sparrow

[vapid sparrow]

Eeeeeek! I'm so excited!!! Her dress sounds so beautiful!! I'm sure she looks amazing too. Oh P is soo gonna cry when he sees her!

[solar narwhal]

writing the P part now

[vapid sparrow]

[solar narwhal]

I tried t o describe the dress as best I could using the pcitures I posted up there

AHHHHHHH

I'M SO EXCITED

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1131995330179768360/1218653818317701281/ezgif.com-crop.gif

I decided to use @warm pendants idea of the Ergo tulips

@vapid sparrow

[warm pendant]

The use of my Ergo Tulips idea here is so heartwarming. I’m honor for you to use my idea in your story.

[vapid sparrow]

https://tenor.com/view/excited-laugh-giggle-happy-smile-gif-5570464

I'm crying ah! I'm so happy for them!

[solar narwhal]

They definietly deserve it 😭

[solar narwhal]

@vapid sparrow You ready to cry more? 🥲

@warm pendant

[vapid sparrow]

Ahhhh! I'm squealing!!! So precious! ^^

[warm pendant]

So precious!

[solar narwhal]

I'm doing the whole ceremony and I'm about to cry

[solar narwhal]

@vapid sparrow @warm pendant It happened!

I could burst 😭

[solar narwhal]

I am STILL spiraling because of the marriage 😭

https://media.discordapp.net/attachments/1131995330179768360/1218653818317701281/ezgif.com-crop.gif

I just re-reead my snippet I put and I'm just like hjafoaehg

[solar narwhal]

@warm pendant @vapid sparrow Have some fluff for your tuesday!

[vapid sparrow]

I can't get enough of their sweetness. I'm writing a darker tale, so this truly brightens my day ^^

[solar narwhal]

I shall continue to tag you in my fluff t hen ❤️

[vapid sparrow]

Please do!

[solar narwhal]

Have you r ead their story up to this point on ao3?

It's like 96% fluff ^^

My own heart is very much fluff, so it pours out in this

[solar narwhal]

Came up with a new word XD

[late grail]

washclosh

[solar narwhal]

P's SUCH a sweet bean @vapid sparrow

[vapid sparrow]

I have not! But I'll definitely look into it! ^^

[vapid sparrow]

https://tenor.com/view/cute202-gif-20765606

[vapid sparrow]

I'm debating about sharing the full story here. I don't think it breaks any rules, but I don't want to risk a ban. So, here's a cute scene from the story, instead. ^^
Carmeo.

[solar narwhal]

Working on a new fic

[warm pendant]

I manage to work on a bit of writing this evening. This is the progress of what I got. Trying to add in my subplot I’m currently working on: Involving my characters Finn (Rhosyn’s older brother), Coyra, and Aliza (the little girl. This was my priority and I’m glad I got some in for them.

[viscid dew]

😭🤚

cutest shit ever bro

[steel osprey]

I'm gonna keep jumping between fics before I fall

[warm pendant]

Some fluff before I sleep

[warm pendant]

I wrote almost all day. My fingers hurt but it was worth it. :3

[solar narwhal]

Kuru = Ultimate chaos

https://tenor.com/view/chaos-gif-22919457

Carlo is the mother of the group

"You knew what you were doing, young man!"

[warm pendant]

Chapter 3 is taking long than I expected, but I have a blushy P

[reef pagoda]

It's been a while since I posted here, but have a preview of the next chapter of Our House is Not a Zoo

[solar narwhal]

I went to a penguin encounter once a few years ago

I was enthralled

I love penguins

[reef pagoda]

The next chapter is up now if you want to read.

https://archiveofourown.org/works/55736530/chapters/144104296

[steel osprey]

YAYYYYYYY

[reef pagoda]

Hi Kuru

I'll be honest, this chapter mostly came from the fact that I keep mentioning Carlo being a pianist and wanting to have an excuse for him to actually play the damn piano

Also I wanted to write about Romeo chucking a penguin into the back of a van like some sus person

[steel osprey]

This is so adorable 🥹💖💖
Poor Romeo, made an enemy of a penguin 😭

||I just wanted an excuse to write in a Carlo Burrito pun||

[reef pagoda]

Hah, get burrito-ed fool

[vapid sparrow]

Carrito! Lol this is so cute! ^^

[vapid sparrow]

Penguin! So cute! I'll have to check out the rest of the story sometime

[warm pendant]

Started on chapter 4

[warm pendant]

A couple days break from work has me working a bit of chapter 4.

[vapid sparrow]

Little snippet from my newest one-shot.
CW: PD, death

[warm pendant]

Rhosyn angry. Worked on this before work.

[solar narwhal]

She needs a snickers

[warm pendant]

She’s not herself when she’s hungry. Lol

Luckily, I got something fluffy here.

[vapid sparrow]

This is so precious! ^^

[warm pendant]

Thank you!

[vapid sparrow]

Little snippet of a later chapter of a story I'm writing. A precursor to (spoilers) ||Romeo becoming KoP||

[warm pendant]

Sharing my progress I’ve made this morning and in the afternoon before playing Kingdom Hearts for the first time. This is some progress I made to the previous snippet. Funny enough, I had a dark video analysis in the background while writing this.

[eager patrol]

I keep writing but forget to post it

https://tenor.com/view/spongebob-meme-spongebob-screaming-spongebob-screaming-run-away-gif-4374785819174740755

[warm pendant]

I forgot to share these snippets yesterday, but here it is along with my take on The Atoned.

[timid cloud]

Enjoying your take on the Atoned so far

[warm pendant]

Thank you!

[timid cloud]

Yea it’s very a interesting way to portray her and I think it makes sense
She was getting old
Honestly I’m happy you included the Atoned she an underrated stalker.

I would have probably written about her as well if I had a way to fit her into my story
Can’t really think of one though

But yea appreciate you giving love to this under appreciated character

[warm pendant]

I’ve been productive today - I managed to do some writing this morning and some tonight. I’m still halfway through the section, but I wanted to share more interactions with the three. Let’s just say I almost teared up writing the last part.

[timid cloud]

Introduction to chapter 2 Owlette enters the Factory

“Attention
Electricity is highly efficient at subduing puppets. If you are not a Stalker, get out!”
Seems they’re inviting me in.
Well someone had to clean up this shithole

[timid cloud]

Adding onto this

Attention
Electricity is efficient when subduing puppets. If you are not a Stalker, get out!
Seems they’re inviting me in.
Well someone had to clean up this shithole and those rich elites certainly weren’t going to do it. They couldn’t possibly care less about the people less fortunate than they are.
To think I was like that once…
she had been born into a rich family. Although her parents had high expectations of her.
She never had to worry about the problems regular people of Krat did.
She didn’t realize how much she cared about her family until the frenzy had taken everyone she knew and left her with nothing.

[reef pagoda]

Feels like it's been too long since I was active on this channel cuz I've been struggling to write anything. I finally got myself to complete the last chapter of the animals fic though!

[reef pagoda]

https://archiveofourown.org/works/55736530/chapters/146512699

This. Took. Forever!!

But now that it's done, I can move on to the next fic

[steel osprey]

YIPPEE

[reef pagoda]

You're getting vampire AU next 🦇

[warm pendant]

So, I’m working on chapter 5 (or at least beginning it the best of my abilities.) in the process. One thing I enjoy doing is use Google Keep and take notes on certain ideas I have in mind for a future chapter.

Last night, I wrote down a snippet of Rhosyn discovering Geppetto’s selfish plans. This hurt me a lot, and you’re going to join in!!

Here’s the snippet. I changed the format to blue so it’s easy to read.

[warm pendant]

Sharing my fight scene of chapter 5 I’m working on before I go to bed. Still making some edits and stuff, but I manage to write this out after spending quality time with my mother.

[timid cloud]

Chapter2
Part of a Short scene I’ve got so far

[timid cloud]

Owlette background a scene with her mother.
Slight edit.

[warm pendant]

When was the last time I shared a snippet here? Regardless, have some snippets on a chapter I’m working on follow by some Ergo Tulips lore.

[timid cloud]

I love this

Especially that first screenshot

[warm pendant]

Snippet for chapter 6

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Owlette meeting Simon Manus in the Grand Exhibition.
CW
Mention of human experimentation

[timid cloud]

Loving your character dialogue

This is off to a great start

[timid cloud]

Not finished but finally started a basic introduction for this character.

[warm pendant]

Here to drop a snippet between Geppetto & Pino. I'm also using a new writing program.