Alive - Sam KaYY

[uneven jungle]

hey everyone I have a song out called Alive It's a bass house track, funny story the song got picked on Soundcloud editorial playlists, it has 14k thousand streams but I didn't get any real feedback for the track it was just fire emoji's and stuff, I would love to know your honest opinion on my track, sound design and quality of the track, It would be a great help I'm new to this discord and stuff, I would love to hear and give my feedback as well

here's the Soundcloud link - https://soundcloud.com/samkayymusic/alive?si=2d40eadfc3b2463d939a78a933aabd21&utm_source=clipboard&utm_medium=text&utm_campaign=social_sharing

[radiant jackal]

I think you could layer the leads a little bit better. Now they feel a little bit thin to be honest. I would add more ambient back ground stuff from the begging from the 2nd break. The first 8 bar is boring. After that its fine. The track the concept is fire. I really like the 2 fake drops but after that it loses some energy. I hope this feedback will be usefull for you

Great job on the track 🔥

[uneven jungle]

thank you so much for the feedback brother it's gonna help a lot, let me know if I can be of any help to you

[radiant jackal]

Okey dokey

[sour hull]

i agree with the leads sounding thin, i would also make that bass grittier. Try to use some saturation like saturn 2 and make that bass growl, i might have a preset for that. Also love the second drop fake out but not a huge fan of the first one, I think you should just have one build up. as its done well imo. Also as Marcell said, more ambience can go a long way, also effects like sweeps, downlifters, etc. I also hear white noise in the drop, maybe experimenting with different patterns can be a cool thing to do.

[short cobalt]

well loving the vibe of this one