Roast this vid pls

[drowsy locust]

https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=hGkOgEuH2n4

[sharp osprey]

I’m not a professional, so take this as just my personal opinion, but I think your intro could feel a lot stronger if you showed more extreme examples right away to really sell how difficult or impressive the challenge is; when I think about videos like the “build a secret room” trend that blew up, the ones that performed best immediately showed something that looked almost impossible (crazy huge rooms that were supposed to be in walls), which made me want to keep watching, whereas here the start sets a low-states expecation.

I’d also consider changing the font in the beginning since it comes across a little outdated and slightly less professional compared to what most polished creators are using, so maybe look at others in your niche and find something cleaner (but unique) that can also become part of your brand.

You’ve got a solid YouTuber-style delivery overall, but there were a couple moments where I didn’t fully understand what you were saying (like around 0:03), so tightening clarity there would help a lot.

Also, between about 0:05–0:10 there isn’t much visual movement, and especially for a younger audience, that can hurt retention, so adding more motion or quick visual changes every few seconds could keep things more engaging.

These are just random thoughts from a yt addict lol

[drowsy locust]

Thanks, that was really helpful

[sharp osprey]

I’m happy that what I said gave value! You got a new subscriber

[barren spear]

I dont mean to be rude…. but this is such a bad video idea lmaooooooo….

The entire concept is legit standing still and holding left click….

The greatest comedian in the universe could not make that interresting

[drowsy locust]

I agree

In my head it would have been the same as "i survived sensory deprivation" or "50 hours buried alive", but the gaming version of that loses a lot of engagement

[sage kernel]

Skill issue. THERE IS ALWAYS A WAY

Like what if you forced your friends to do them? Or challenged streamers? @drowsy locust

Title = Paying streamers to do impossible challenges

Donate $5 to a Minecraft streamer and tell them if they can break a pickaxe with unbreaking 255, you'll donate $100-$250

[sage kernel]

Ohhhhhhhh

What about "I Survived 100 days on 2b2t"

I think that hits the vibe because we're all anticipating some trolls / hackers or whatever to come and kill you

If you die, the video ends

[drowsy locust]

but that's been done a bunch of times before, like if you search it up on youtube you get endless results, so i don't really see the point in doing that. even if i slightly change up the concept by making the video end if i die, i'm not really interested in 2b2t and hacks in general anyway

[drowsy locust]

well, thats not really the kind of content i want to make. like i felt like if i "tortured myself" it would be hard and exciting for me, and people could also be interested, but i do think its not nearly as interesting as it is in real life, as i said before

i appreciate the suggestions though, even though they're not really my style

[sage kernel]

What is your style

Single player?

[drowsy locust]

i mean my current ideas mostly revolve around solo challenges or exploring a certain subject, so you could say single player but not like hardcore build videos or anything

[sturdy apex]

This is lowkey a cool idea for a thumbnail, however I would do the following:

1. Make the text glow
2. Add vingette around border
3. Mess around with contrast levels to get your character to stand out and make the water texture more obvious
   Otherwise this is really cool.

[drowsy locust]

i don't think it would change much if i modified it now, but those are actually good ideas, so i'll try to make them work