#Which intro is the best? How could it be improved?

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onyx vortex
wary spear
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I think the first works best with the thumabnail and title but the second one could work but the t and tn would need to be around kai

crisp lion
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This is just personal opinion, but I like the energy of the narration of the 2nd one better than the 1st one, makes me more hooked.

signal stratus
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Intro 2 is flat out confusing… First I thiught is this a Kai cenat video essay…. wtf????? - then you say “I quit”….. whaaaattttttttt¿?¿?

Intro 1: Better …. first 5 seconds are rough to watch…. bad cuts and too many cuts too quickly……. also, google “eye-tracing editing”

onyx vortex
signal stratus
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(I like the concept of the first 5 seconds... just the execution is a bit messy and not nice to at... at least in this version... I notice its a month old, so maybe you fixed it lol:))

patent elk
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