#I tried to become a Famous Streamer in 7days

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red dune
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Any feedback is helpful pls help
https://youtu.be/FVPR4Pc3TPA?si=orQF-blfsZoAI6vU

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I Tried to Become a FAMOUS Streamer in Just 7 Days

I tried to become a FAMOUS STREAMER in just 7 days… and it was absolute chaos.
From pulling all-nighters, streaming to ZERO viewers, begging strangers to watch me, to pulling off the craziest IRL stunts just to get attention — this might be the most insane challenge I’ve ever done.

I invited random streamers, crashed live chats, attempt...

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hidden pond
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You need a mic, ASAP. It's impossible to make out what you're saying at times. I wouldn't do much else until you get one.

2nd. If you can cut something out of a video, and the story in the video still makes sense, cut it out. There's WAY too much fluff in there

GLHF!

lament cipher
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Make your banner bigger, IT'S LITERALLY THE BEST BANNER I'VE EVER SEEN AND I CAN'T SEE IT @red dune

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It's cool ASF seeing someone do YouTube in South Africa, hope you're here for the long game 💪

tidal oracle
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no jokes aside

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try making the red background of "fans" green and make the white text pop more with a black outline or so

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on my screen its almost not clear what the video is about too without reading the title

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thats kinda smol

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i can see the red very clearly, and color does grab attention - but so does contrast

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the clearer the contrast from the start the better

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now, not every contrast in thumbnail makes sense

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perhaps give yourself purposefully rugged clothes, to show "i was poor, still made it"

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thats a more stark contrast than "unknown"

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because every starter is unknown obviously

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so instead of wearing a red shirt, get your color pop with a red-tshirtet audience and give yourself brown, torn rugged clothes

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itll pop more and make a better contrast

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also, i dont know about the text box with speed etc.
that seems way too clickbaity and it doesnt seem believable

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that may work for children, but is that your target audience?

tidal oracle
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the shot with the woman with the green shirt should perhaps be your intro

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it is emotionally loaded

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and you could like
add text when you speak in your next video, especially with the intro

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just watch any mr beast intro and youll know what i mean

red dune
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Thanks guy I will start with banner And I just bought a mic also We are here for the long run baby lets goo
Thanks again and I will fix the thumbnail

red dune
crystal aspen
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There's no reason to keep "fans" text there, it just adds nothing. I think the fitst thumbnail is pretty good, but main focus should be improving the content