Title: I Built Spider-Man: Brand New Day Webshooters In Real Life!!
#what can be improved??
rigid vessel
rigid vessel
like this??
rigid vessel
what about this one??
wide ridge
The last one makes it clear what it is. I thought it was those retractable wrist blades from assassins creed at first lol
What's your title? Because just using the last one makes 0 curiosity for me. You haven't opened a loop quite yet
rigid vessel
What's your title? Because just using the last one makes 0 curiosity for me. You...
Title: I Built Spider-Man: Brand New Day Webshooters In Real Life!!
rigid vessel
The last one makes it clear what it is. I thought it was those retractable wrist...
With the title does the second thumbnail become click worthy?
wide ridge
With the title does the second thumbnail become click worthy?
In my opinion it's unrecognizable and confusing. But once you have the spiderman arm with the web coming out I 100% understand what you made.
Also, it's spelled Magazines
Also, you may want to work on that title a bit. Even shortening it can make it more consise and easier to understand. A good rule is "If I can remove a word and the title still makes sense, the word was unnecessary. Example: I Built Spider-Man Webshooters In Real Life! > I Built Spider-Man: Brand New Day Webshooters In Real Life
I find that new title more interesting to me because I don't even remember the "Brand New Day" title of the movie lol. I just know spiderman
You could also show the long-range better if you show the web shooting up, but then also coming back down super far away in the back ground. Like a giant arc of the web so to speak, if that makes sense
wide ridge
This is my favorite for a more technical build
wide ridge
what about this one??
This is my fav if you're appealing to kids
But I would try to play with the background and add that web element a bit
I don't know the niche, but I would look at comps and see what's currently working on other channels that have built web slingers