I got this commissioned, anything I should change? | Created | Page 1

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 12:50 PM

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What is your title and video content?

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 1:02 PM

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crimson marten What is your title and video content?

still trying to get an exact title, but it will probably be something like, "I 100%'d Duck Season VR... it was TERRIFYING" or something similar, and its completing the entire game achievements and all. Trophy hunting is a better way to explain it

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 1:09 PM

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Yeah don't put the text

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BUT I would put the trophies achievements

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 1:10 PM

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crimson marten BUT I would put the trophies achievements

like floating around me?

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 1:11 PM

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And also say Completed or Finished maybe not I 100%d

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Either that or at the top

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maybe the last achievements or the hardest / most known

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Or an eaasy to understand like "Finished the game with a trophy achievement

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 1:13 PM

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crimson marten And also say Completed or Finished maybe not I 100%d

i photoshopped it quickly just to get a look at it, before i have them revise it. I put 100% behind the dog just to see how it'd look. For the achievements around i def think that can work ive seen otehrs do that

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 1:15 PM

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The 100% doesnt add anything

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even, it makes the dog less focused

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 1:16 PM

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crimson marten even, it makes the dog less focused

alright imma have them remove the first text and try out the floating achievement thing

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 1:17 PM

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Good

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 1:37 PM

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crimson marten Good

i quickly edited it but maybe something like this?

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 1:46 PM

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Make them hifger

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higher

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nobody will read them like this

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 1:58 PM

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maygbe something like this? i thought blocking the fingers looked weirrd

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 2:07 PM

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Its very hard to read

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I would not use real ones

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Id put one with a big trophy and bold text complete the game achieved

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something like that

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 2:34 PM

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crimson marten Id put one with a big trophy and bold text complete the game achieved

Which side would you put it on

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 2:40 PM

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Like its a notification

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 2:48 PM

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Usually for the achievements it’ll be like top right, to left, or center bottom, are you thinking kinda like a Xbox achievement?

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 3:09 PM

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Well what did you play this game on?

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use the same

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wheter its ps5 or steam notifications

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It comes down to what your audience will understand the easiest, I dont know your audience

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 3:50 PM

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crimson marten It comes down to what your audience will understand the easiest, I dont know you...

it was on steam, but with my audience ig its so broad since its achievement base, ive gotten viewers from multiple platforms. But ill try steam first

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 3:57 PM

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Good

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 6:47 PM

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crimson marten Good

I've got the revised image and Ive tried putting achievements or steam notification in and I feel like it doesnt fit. Im thinking this by itself with a strong title might be the best bet since this is a stylized thumbnail. what do you think?

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title could be like: I 100% Completed Duck Season… And It Was TERRIFYING

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 7:14 PM

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or just I completed without the 100% because it feels repetitive for no reason

sharp merlin Sep 10, 2025, 7:19 PM

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crimson marten or just I completed without the 100% because it feels repetitive for no reason

maybe i can do something like: I Completed EVERY Achievement in Duck Season

crimson marten Sep 10, 2025, 7:20 PM

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Yeah

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that works

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I Completed EVERY Achievements in Duck Season

#I got this commissioned, anything I should change?