#“I Found Lost Stuff Underwater, THEN Searched For Their Owners”

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raw patio
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Hey guys, let me know if this title thumbnail combo grabs your attention, and makes sense. I’d love any ideas how to make it better! Thank you!

dapper totem
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Both certainly did grab my attention icl. I feel there's something missing from the thumbnail but I can't workout what 😭

whole lark
half rivet
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Honestly, I think it's really strong. Yeah, the owners aren't in the thumbnail, but I feel like adding another element would make it less effective. I wouldn't change anything, just go with this exact thumbnail. Maybe use a totally different thumbnail with people representing the item owners for the A/B test.

raw patio
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Thanks so much everybody. I ended up trying some text, and AB tested them, and the one with text one slightly. Here's the final version:

wild shore
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i like it, but i don't thinkt the "old" text is necesari, the looks of it alredy give that sensation. with this said, you could do a version where you find a phone with a text on screen saying something like "if found call to [number]", by doing that you will include the "seacrhing for their owners" factor, which this thumbnail lacks of.

keep it up, luck with the video and make sure to share it when it drops!

raw patio
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I tested a few other versions and this one won. I also changed the title to "Whoever Lost This, I WILL Find You"