Can you roast my Old Spice in a Wind Tunnel Video?

[ionic kestrel]

https://youtu.be/2dCUXeeO2SY?si=dsCpTXFY4BIXga-6 not sure what i did wrong but here is the link!

[pastel hawk]

Make the thumbnail better

[ionic kestrel]

How do you recommend?

[pastel hawk]

Synthetic graphics or outline

[woeful sinew]

idk wtf I’m watching. Tell me at the beginning why… why do I want to watch a deodorant in a wind tunnel… I’m 40 seconds in and I have zero idea what the point if this is…

Also, the thumbnail…. WHY ARE YOU BLURRING THE OBJECT???????

[ionic kestrel]

Haha this incredibly helpful! Thanks!!! Keep the roast coming!

[woeful sinew]

Quick thing

For all your thumbnails, remove the text. Pointless noise

buy a cheap studiolight with a softbox.

And then add a quick s curve in photoshop

That’d make these thumbnails much better!

Remember a photo says more than a thousand words.

Keep it simple.

Also, if youre gonna have text, make sure it doesnt repeat the title or just describe something in the picture

The text adds something to the packaging here.

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Also, find cooler stuff to put in the wind tunnel. Think you could make something quite cool here.

Also, cut down on hour fluf in the video.

Dont overoptimize but in your vid you’re just bumbling with all sorts of pointless stuff that I dont care about.

Maybe also, try and break stuff or make stuff blow up.

More fun when you push stuff to their limits

https://m.youtube.com/@Ididathing

Study this guy’s channel.

Maybe your personality doesnt match his, but I still think you could learn a LOT from him.

[naive knoll]

@woeful sinew you give very good advice my friend

[ionic kestrel]

So, for thumbnails, should it enhance the title or should the title enhance the thumbnail? It is my assumption they go hand in hand, yes? And one of the other things i am assuming is that most people don't know what a wind tunnel is so my thought of having the object in the wind tunnel for the thumbnail is to provide context of what the video is about. Maybe these are the wrong assumptions, but I would love your feedback on the above to help me better understand thumbnails? For aesthetic purposes, I would like to make thumbnails close to this aesthetic, to me it doesn't feel overly clickbaity but piques my interest!

[uncut pike]

Idk he did tell me to go to one of the worlds most dangerous countries for video 😭😭