#ROAST MY NEW VID!!

1 messages Ā· Page 1 of 1 (latest)

clear ether
#

What do y'all think about the PACKAGING, the actual EDITING STYLE, pacing etc...

dusky torrent
#

why is it the same theme as mrbeast lol.

maybe make it fitting for a crime scene. Like the dude can have police tape behind him with dangerous equipment, and the female can stand behind a wall covered in blood or something

clear ether
dusky torrent
#

fair

clear ether
#

And I personally like it, it adds a beautiful contrast in the blue vs pink

#

But I totally get where ur coming from

clear ether
toxic tusk
#

I’d be interested to walk through your compositing in photoshop

#

Clean af thumbnail

clear ether
# toxic tusk Clean af thumbnail

Appreciate it - I’m sure I could have my designer send a explaination if u need. Any feedback on the vid itself besides packaging?

#

It’s a 8/10 rn, I rlly think it’s just gonna take a few more days to really assess results tho

whole jewel
#

Nah you know I’m joking tho bro thumbnail is fire well done šŸ™ŒšŸ”„

clear ether
#

Ending it all rn - thanks tho!

jade jolt
#

i like concept. preety cool one

jade jolt
#

i would actually try and continue this as series if it performs ~ok'ish

#

like

#

making comparsions with different popular serial franchises

#

and even branching in big

jade jolt
#

p.s. new season is so good :D

#

i was going to keep it untill full release, than get one snack chill day to watch it.. but after E3.. i just need next friday asap

jade jolt
#

p.p.s. cool video also

clear ether
clear ether
clear ether
jade jolt
#

you technically baiting click with dexter, but never mentioning it.

#

i mean in intro

clear ether
#

Currently the title is ā€˜male vs female serial killers - who wins?ā€

clear ether
# jade jolt i mean in intro

I think regardless the retention was 40%, so stats wise I feel as if it should be performing but yes reaffirming Dexter in the intro may have helped reaffirm

whole jewel
#

Maybe something along the lines of like: ā€œReviewing Every Female Killer More DEADLY Than DEXTERā€

#

Potentially a bit wordy but hopefully you get my point

jade jolt
#

retention is cool, since video is actually entertaining, and overal script is fun

clear ether
jade jolt
#

but i would just guess it looks like this

clear ether
clear ether
jade jolt
#

you told it's 40%

clear ether
#

And did u have a specific title in mind?

#

Ahhh Woops 😭😭

jade jolt
#

but it's like 55% drop of in 5 seconds, and than probably people stay

#

its just a guess :)

#

since you broke rule #1 with this video

#

"confirm the click"

#

and there is also rule #2, but (thats mine)

clear ether
jade jolt
#

it called "people don't read"

#

so if you press on dexter

#

and there is no/almost no dexter

#

you move

#

i actually haven't xD

#

i read title after 1 min

clear ether
#

That’s a v strong point actually

#

It’s like an autopilot thing I feel like I’ve defo done that

jade jolt
#

so i would not stress alot about this one

#

let it cook

#

you just have ~1-2 month of dexter hype to make some related to him uploads

#

and in next ones, make sure to use him in title-thumbnail-5 second

clear ether
#

I made a vid called ā€œthe genius acting behind serial killersā€ made dex the MAIN element in the thumbnail, but in the vid he was just ONE of the several killers I addressed

#

Why do u suppose THAT case is different than this one?

jade jolt
#

its fine. but again

#

imagine you press on "how MR BEAST became famous"

#

with mr beast and 100000000$ on thumbnail

#

and first five seconds

#

"you know there is youtube secret structure that is underwater, but not alot of people know it beside some guys"

#

with this on screen

#

(random pic from google, i dont know this guy)

#

yeah thats cool... but i just need to see 2-3 cuts of jimmy, growing subs, and money for example

#

theeeeeen...just whatever

#

video could even be about moon cycles and taro cards for rest 20 minutes if it tied to mr beast

#

but let me at least have aproval, that title + thumb is at least tied to some expectations

#

so in your video , i was like -> "hmm...there is movie about some girl who is deadlier than dexter? let me check"

#

then you start with cool questions, and im like "ok...interesting"

#

but thats curiousity and also you asked to check pacing

#

if im random dude who chiling with doritos and wanted to see dexter

#

i probably go back to shorts again xD

#

never know

clear ether
#

That’s a v fair point - the image of Dexter is too misleading, would a thumbnail change to perhaps ā€œHannibal lectorā€ as the male, make a difference?

#

If I were to redo this, maybe that question is COOL but there needs to be graphics OF Dexter, of pearl… and a slight suggestion that she may be better in some way… and then rest can go as usual

#

Just because the thumbnail has built it up to be like that

jade jolt
clear ether
#

I’ve always thought things cook when U make a specific change

#

Thumbnail, titling etc

jade jolt
#

it's fine, 40% retention, it's not 10of10 complete flop

jade jolt
#

just sit and "age"

clear ether
jade jolt
#

it could just blow up anytime you dont expect

#

i came back from "vacation" and geting 5th 10of10 in a row xD

clear ether
jade jolt
#

dunno what happened this month, but every video just none impressions + ctr in deep ocean

clear ether
clear ether
jade jolt
#

yeah, i just upload :) and working on next

clear ether
#

I am curious tho, if u like letting things ā€œageā€, aren’t u ever worried you aren’t ā€œageingā€ it with the BEST optimal inputs (titles/thumbs)

jade jolt
clear ether
#

How do I know which is better ā€œWho’s smarter - male vs female killersā€ OR ā€œmale vs female serial killersā€ , u have any PERSONAL opinion on these titles?

jade jolt
#

15 is not too much ofc. i got better examples in some places, but would be hard to remember which one

jade jolt
#

constantly changing stuff, will just confuse YT

#

remember, algo working

#

people who click -> watch

#

thats next guys who is similiar to them, who will be served with this video

clear ether
#

So should I revert to ā€œmale vs female serial killersā€ and just shut up about it 😭

jade jolt
#

so by changing title you may just confuse YT, since new title will be more clickable for different guys

clear ether
#

LOLL seriously???

#

Ur methods r so taboo I love it

jade jolt
#

ah yeah

#

i like this example (my personal)

clear ether
#

Do u have a personal opinion on either of those?

jade jolt
#

guy sit in front of apple and orange, and "thinks" what to pick...

#

"thinks" in quotation for a reason

#

thats most common "stopper" for humans.. like "i need to think".. " i still thinking / deciding" etc.

#

well... to "think" you need inputs of information

#

if there is no inputs -> there is nothing to think about

#

and best thing to do is to act

#

so if you don't have obvious chain like..."hmm..apple is nice, but i ate too much sugar yestarday, so it would not fit my macros in a week...but orange...i ate nothing this morning, and there is not a good idea to raise acidity in stomach early..."

#

and so on

#

just toss a coin and eat dmn apple :)

#

or orange.. whatever result is

jade jolt
#

probably just "vs" not "Vs" but thats just me

#

i like to balance caps

#

but i like caps :)

#

my titles is mostly - CAPS CAPS nocaps CAPS CAPS

#

or - No Caps CAPS CAPS No Caps

clear ether
clear ether
#

tossing a coin acc sounds fun lol, i think ima steal that strat... makes life feel more fun

jade jolt
#

i tossed coin for like 10 years in a row xD

#

never regreted

#

started from "what to wear"

#

but it later start to feel as "extra friction" before you just pick tshirt and go

#

so yeah... in the end, i just instantly identify tasks that require 0 extra brain input

#

titles , as much as they can impact performance... in reality i would say is 5% of success. not more

#

and it should be just readable, and understandable

jade jolt
#

and yeah, its far more crazier vids that gets traction after 100-200 days

#

just need to find audience

clear ether
# jade jolt forgot to follow up

wow this is an insane graph. zooming into the origin it looks like it was DEAD for quite some time and then that spike gave it views forever

#

good stuff g, appreciate the chat sorry i didn't circle back on it in time lol

sweet peak
#

@clear ether intro there is too many things going on for the viewer to see

sweet peak
#

@clear ether

clear ether
sweet peak
#

ye

clear ether
#

the stars, the people AND the serial killers?

sweet peak
#

I was watching one of Jon Y's videos and he mentioned

#

"Respect viewer's eyes as well as their time"

#

and they specifically mentioned that too much stuff on screen is just too much

#

while keeping things focused where there eyes can lock in on the main point is what is good

#

I hope this tip helps

#

It was Jon's video

#

after all

clear ether
clear ether
# sweet peak while keeping things focused where there eyes can lock in on the main point is w...

if u ever have time, i'd love ur thoughts on my newest vid too https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=roDlf-2f4L4&t=123s

Today I EXPOSE the secret reasons DEXTER RESURRECTION is the BEST spin-off YET. Whether it's Harrison Morgan's sloppy murders, or the dynamic between Dexter and Harrison - these are all FASCINATING dynamics that make this show AMAZING.

JOIN MY DISCORD: https://discord.com/invite/tGfZYZnSad

Like and SUBSCRIBE!

ā–¶ Play video
#

it acc has the HIGHEST retention of any of my newer vids with 47% avd

sweet peak
#

Wow this is fantastic

#

However

#

This is my personal opinion from just the first minute

#

the editing is awesome

#

I thought it was a faceless channel

#

at first

#

until I saw you

#

which you came in 30 seconds after the intro

#

IMO if you show your face with your dialogue combined with the editing, it would go towards your personal brand

#

those are my thoughts

#

The cuts and the editing is a massive contribution to the high retention, nice!

clear ether
clear ether
#

And how I use smash cuts to break tension etc

sweet peak
#

Keep it up

jade jolt
#

yeah i agree. + will unload early editing alot.

#

~5 seconds -> cool edit
~5 seconds -> you
~5 seconds -> small edit
Hook is done -> video

clear ether
clear ether
jade jolt
#

done

jade jolt