Is this a good title or is it missing context / is there a better way to write it?
Title: I Bought My First Car After Making $10,000
#Is there a better way to write the title?
earnest lynx
frank forge
No Omar, first one is good to go! you don't to clarify about the source and the time period.. JUST HIGHLIGHT WHAT ATTRACTS AND CREATES DESIRE !!!
earnest lynx
No Omar, first one is good to go! you don't to clarify about the source and the ...
Thank you for the feedback!
I found a simpler way to say the first one:
What do you think of this:
