#This is for a video about revealing my original superhero team, their power, roles & origin stories.

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violet bough
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I wanted to keep it simple but still intriguing so I just added silhouettes of the members glowing in their power colors. I couldn't fit them standing next to each other cuz of the space it too tight so I just did this & added text. How'd I do? Does this intrigue you or make you want to click to watch? The title for it is still undecided btw

west dagger
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But if im 100% honest i wouldn't click. The idea itself is not for that big of audience either

violet bough
# west dagger I like the colors but i think there's prob too many of em u don't need all of th...

Well how else do I show them all? If I remove some & somebody clicks they'll see there's more than what they saw. Plus most of my audience are online friends, real life friends, family & actual people I don't know but most are people I know. Everbody who's watched me wants to know more about my superhero universe plus I reached like 100 subscribers.... yeah I know not that much of a flex but I gotta reveal stuff at some point right?

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Do I add their logos in the thumbnail instead then? At least those will be easier cuz they're just circle shaped with the actual logos in them.

west dagger
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But it's too much to have them all. And anyways its good to exceed the expectations. I dont mean putting random styff for example if u talk about thing X and u suddenly out of nowhere start yapping abt thing Y noone cares. I mean like if they think they get somethung but they ALSO get more

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Not sure if i explained it well hope u understood what i kinda even meant

violet bough
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So if I yap about each members backstory, the inspiration behind them & their powers & design, I would be yapping cuz that's what the video will be basically.

west dagger
# violet bough Do I add their logos in the thumbnail instead then? At least those will be easie...

Idk i think the characters alone is good, logos aren't that clickable imo. Like ur eye catches better a character than colored circle with funny lines on it. Maybe 3-5 characters would be cool or something. Clean, shows enough and they'll get more. Thumbnails anyway basically never showe everything in the thumbnail, that's what the video is for. If u make a video of testing every iphone ever made u don't put a photo of them all but maybe side by side oldest and newest or something

west dagger
violet bough
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Hmmm... so if I put Cosmic Crow (the leader & main character) in the middle & have some members behind him blurred or pixelated (Idk how to do pixelated type of blur tho) would thst work... actually nvm I think that'll be to hard do even for me....

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Cuz him being visible cuz it's his team & the other members aren't so visible that's what I meant.

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violet bough
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Yeah he'd be bigger & others slightly smaller, you got it. I said it'd be too hard cuz I draw each member seperately & making sure their each individual sizes be different in a thumbnail & still having them visible enough is too hard while fitting them in without it cluttering.

west dagger
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I'm not sure i understood the problem, could u clarify? Like u can jst edit em and scale,add blur etc

violet bough
violet bough
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I was editing it but it bugged out, one sec I'll send it again.

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Made it last night, I used your feedback & didn't put all of them & this time I had Cosmic Crow be visible with glowing silhouettes behind him in the distance being some of the teamates. Is the text of the team name too much?

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Okay there it is

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Sorry for the hold

west dagger
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I think that's def better than the 1st one

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The dark character kinda blends too much with the bg tho. U could also add some white stroke for example?

violet bough
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Do you mean Cosmic Crow's suit? I see it does blend in.

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Which one looks better for him to stick out now?

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I also realized the outline is too thick... I'll fix that

west dagger
violet bough
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Here are thin versions of 2 & 3.

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Which color looks better & less uhh... off compared to everything else in the thumbnail?

west dagger
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I think 1st one is better. Both looks good but kinda cleaner/brighter