i reveal my plans for this year.
literally the whole video
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i reveal my plans for this year.
literally the whole video
This is tbh kinda same as the intro. Feels like u dont know really what you're doing. Like it sounds that you're not comfortable talking and it's all unscripted. Also for me personally it's boring that nothing rly happens there and there's only pictures
And i mean by not knowing what you're doing like there's not a clear thing u focus on and talk about, and if u talk abt something it's kinda unnecessary
Tbh there is no script cuz when I read a script I mess up way too much & you could tell that I'm reading words instead plus I get nervous reading a script that I get more quiet. When I say things unscripted as you might be able to tell I sound more louder. I am comfortable talking, just I am more comfortable saying stuff unscripted. Plus in this I knew what I was gonna say without having a script. Only cases I use a script is for an intro of a video, the intro for this wasn't read from a script tho.
For me at least, idk if you agree with this but I'll say it... I think focusing on saying stuff using a way I'm comfortable is nicer for me personally than doing something most people use to say stuff with commentary that I am not as comfortable with. Hearing me read a book is just me reading a script for a video, low talking & obvious that I'm reading off a script. I feel like I just repeated what I already said, did I? I hope that's understandable
For context I am an artist who likes comics & art in general who has superhero universe with characters, storylines, of course villains, heros, anti-heros, anti-villains & more. I share stuff related my characters, stories, lore & worlds. Is that what you mean by you don't know what I'm doing?
yeah i totally get u. just some kind of structure is good u know? like points u talk abt. u could like make a list or couple small sentences as to just what to talk about and maybe take a couple takes or/and while editing cut or fix parts
i meant like the video like hard to explain tbh
The context is I'm talking about my plans for 2025, I am the down to Earth storytelling art type of guy, this felt more of my style if you get what I mean.