#Which title would you click??

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quasi osprey
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  1. I Recreated Squid Game Glass Bridge In Miniature (Stop Motion)

  2. I Recreated Squid Game Glass Bridge In Stop Motion With No Experience (Miniature)

  3. I Recreated Squid Game Glass Bridge With Stop Motion In Miniature

Which title is the best? I need feedback!

wind agate
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i think 3rd @quasi osprey

quasi osprey
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cool, thanks for answering

wind agate
night halo
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I recreated Squid Game in Stop Motion

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simple and gets to the point

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or "Squid Game in Stop Motion

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my opinion

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anything could work

quasi osprey
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And should I add Miniature some way?

stone parrot
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I dont think you should

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Thats something you can explain in the video

stone parrot
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If you say “in miniature and stop motion” you kinda giveaway the whole idea

quasi osprey
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You make a good point, thanks

dire geyser
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Your title lacks a curiosity gap

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"I Recreated Squid Game’s Deadliest Challenge in Miniature" sound more interesting

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or "I Thought Recreating Squid Game’s Glass Bridge Would Be Easy… I Was Wrong"

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or "This Miniature Squid Game Glass Bridge Nearly Drove Me Insane"

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or "I Tried Recreating Squid Game’s Glass Bridge in Miniature… With Zero Experience"

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These titles introduce intrigue, causing the viewer to ask questions about the video in their minds such as: Did it work?, How bad was it?, and What mistakes were made?, motivating them to click and watch your video to answer their questions.

quasi osprey
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I really like the first title

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But this shorter one could also work?

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I Recreated Deadliest Squid Game In Stop Motion

dire geyser
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you've stripped it down too much

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it doesnt make sense anymore

quasi osprey
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Ok

dire geyser
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because the sentence structure is all wonky

quasi osprey
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Yeah Yeah I understand what you mean

stone parrot
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I do think the idea itself creates enough curiosity if you read something like “I Recreated x thing in stop motion” you’ll be like wait what? I wanna see the results! Specially since a lot of people is into stop motion

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Like is not something everyone does on a regular basis, i dont think a viewer will be like “oh just another guy recreating squid games”

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(Its just my opinion tho)

quasi osprey
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jup

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go watch it here and roast it: https://youtu.be/qoCzsH45ZzM

I recreated Squid Game’s deadliest challenge, the Glass Bridge, in miniature form! In this video, I’ll show you how I made the figures using only cardboard and brought them to life with stop-motion animation.

I designed the characters by scaling up a LEGO figure, cutting each part from cardboard, and assembling 20 detailed figures. Their legs h...

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stone parrot
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The animation at the end was amazing! But i think the video is way too short, like at that point you could create a yt short instead imo!

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You could take more time to explain each part in more detail, or if its not a tutorial maybe talk about which parts you found more difficult, the artistic decisions you had to made and why you made them, stuff like that!

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Also you could start with an animation of the character doing the intro! “Hi im player 101 and i recreated blablabla here is how i did it”

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I do think your idea has so much potential!