#Looking for a Feedback.

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undone dawn
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Title: The Tragic Tale of Joaquin Phoenix

latent haven
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that's good

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but it will help if you use some text tbh

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try to add a "FAIL" or "TRAGIC" behind him

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it will help a lot

tropic oriole
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I really like it!

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I wonder if it will be easy to see for someone on mobile tho

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Like for someone who is just scrolling

trail token
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Looking at your title and thumbnail combination, I have a few thoughts:

Title is too generic: "The Tragic Tale of Joaquin Phoenix" doesn't create enough curiosity or specificity. It's missing the hook that makes viewers click.

Thumbnail has potential but needs focus: The artistic style is eye-catching, but I'd recommend making the emotional elements more prominent.

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kind fable
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I would honestly make the figure a little bit brighter so its easier to see and stands out

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  • add a vingette
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(dark border around edges)

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Aside from that this is very good

undone dawn
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btw thanks everyone for the feedback

tidal sentinel
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Add Text: BRUTAL

undone dawn
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its not smth about brutal

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not making any sense to add brutal text tbh

tidal sentinel
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ok, btw the thumbnail looks frikin awsome, I am exited to see how well it will work.

undone dawn
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its practice haha