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Thumb: Man with a burlap bag on his head and 20 year old man wearing a red shirt standing behind him with a crazed look. Harsh lighting. Inside of an old abandoned concrete pit. High-quality photo. Mostly unedited besides color.
The actual video is a higher quality I compressed it to fit here.
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Thumb: Man with a burlap bag on his head and 20 year old man wearing a red shirt...
a very loose idea to help you picture the thumbnail, but It will be much different in reality. The burlap sack covers his head like in the video
burnt moth
love the video intro, the arm animation with the silver platter was defiintely a little jittery, and you may need a tad more energy in your VO but the part where he started running was hilarious, and it doesnt feel scripted even if it is (the entire bit not just the running part)
i do like the thumbnail, but why is the ratio so far off, i hope its not troublesome to turn it into proper format
some ways you coul elevate the content, showwhats to come but without the weird country music upbeat intro, just use raw audio (or overlay excitment and screams freom other clips) and show whats to come later on, i would've shown the running bit for a half second for 1 example, let me know if this makes sense im happy to elaborate
taking off his hood in the room should be shown in the beginning intro as well, as i couldnt tell what was happening in thpse first shots and i even paused to stare at them
you dont need to show a scene any longer than 3-5s, the running bit felt a bit long
incar felt a bit long, after he says he has a hard time breathing i would cut right to 1:51 where you introduce tim which is great character dev. btw, introducing ppl slowly through the video. then right away cut to 2:18 where its dark and you arrive, the torture in car bit was meh
i was concerned i saw the length only being 3 mins but was super happy to find out that was just the intro.
all in all if you posted as is i think maybe 10k views, if tweaking some of the longer run on scenes and getting to the actual room part as quick as possible would be your first goal i could def see this video around 200k views
frozen valve
Hey thank you so much for your reply
I’ve been working most of today on the thumbnail and making some adjustments based off of your comments
I will update post this tonight
frozen valve
I incorporated just about everything you said
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This is the updated version i made
Better?
How is the intro? Feedback wanted.
This is the thumbnail
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