How this man accidentally became a Hero

[solid notch]

the thumbnail text says: He saved 2 Million children!
I thought the 2 Million children would be a better scroll stopper than just his Name

alt title:
Who is James Harrison
How James Harrison became a Hero

[mellow sparrow]

I like the title "How This Man Accidentally Became a Hero"

The thumbnail is pretty good, but idk the man should probably be bigger here and more clear since he is the main character

[stable rapids]

I would recommend getting rid of his name in the title.

Ex. Meet The Man Who Accidentally Saved 2 Million Children

Then have him be the focus of the thumbnail, perhaps with children in the background.

Ex.

[solid notch]

I thought about recreating that exact same mr beast thumbnail, but to be honest not the look I am going for, I will never be able to meet the viewers expectations that way; I thought about getting rid of the name, thx for the feedback;
Making him bigger is a good idea, I have to see how; thx for the feedback

[stable rapids]

I wasn’t suggesting recreating the look. Just the placements of the subjects.

[thin rapids]

add to much text is worng

[solid notch]

Ahh my bad, yeah not a bad idea, will see what my skills manage

[solid notch]

Wrong how?