(5min video) Wait, Blackberry is back?

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https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=J29fwDuF3_g

Please only watch it if you can finish the video i'd preference not to wreck retention rates if possible!! any critisim is much appreciated

some feedback ive already received:

• flashes aren't well received ☑️
• talking pace is a little fast ✅

react if you agree

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(5min video) Wait, Blackberry is back?

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title is phenomanal

i would click on it

but yes the flashes hurt my eyes

also if you want to hook the audience i suggest removing EVERYTHING before 11 second mark, in that period there is nothing to keep me there, no voiceover, no hook, and it takes you 11 seconds to start talking, when you do start talking i would stay

just a suggestion

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yes i struggled with whether to remove it or not, thank you for the feedback im going to take it out!

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anytime