is this a good thumbnail?

[torn dome]

made this thumbnail, tell me if this a good concept or if i should change it, and what i should change

oh btw, the title is "The New Minecraft Update is HORRIFYING"

[atomic goblet]

Yes, i think it's pretty good

[torn dome]

nothing i can improve?

[candid hedge]

SICK

[atomic goblet]

No don't think so in case it's only a concept

[torn dome]

no i meant if i should change the concept of the thumbnail or not

thats the thumbnail that ill use for the video

i was asking for people to tell me if they had a better idea for what the thumbnail should be

is this a good thumbnail?

thats better

[urban niche]

Too hard to see the mob in the background. Torch should be lighting it up more, and background blends in with the mob and also your skin

Very critical mb lol

[torn dome]

no no dont apologize for giving feedback when i asked for feedback lol

[urban niche]

🔥

[torn dome]

btw the mob being a bit hard to see was intentional, i thought it would look spookier if it were just the eyes looking over at the person from the darkness

somewhat like this

[urban niche]

Yeah thought so, however I think if the viewer can't see it then it is not effective

[urban niche]

Yeah you can clearly see it in the right, also being balanced with the text on left

[torn dome]

yeah ill def make another one where is more visible, i can just a/b test it

thanks youtube

also thanks for the feedback