The biggest problem I see is that it is clickbait. The title and the thumbnail both makes it seem like Ryan Trahan is in the video, but the video doesn't actually have Ryan in the video. It's super misleading. Maybe try to make a new title and thumbnail. I don't really know what the thumbnail could be, but the title for example could be "Do Ryan Trahan's Height Hacks Work?"
#Ryan Trahan Made Me Tall Overnight
spiral lotus
uneven pollen
The biggest problem I see is that it is clickbait. The title and the thumbnail b...
well he's part of the story (the light to my problem)
icy halo
I feel like it's edited as a short should be
spiral lotus
well he's part of the story (the light to my problem)
Sure, but he's not part of the video. The title and thumbnail makes it seem like he actually is in the video/he's part of the video, which he's not.
More of a title like "Does Ryan Trahan's Height Hack Work?" and a lesser Ryan Trahan focused thumbnail would work better with the overall video.
grizzled roost
Watched the first 2 min...ngl, actually loved it haha
Ppl stick around if the content was good even if they got clickbaited, and besides...the clickbait is nice as well. Keep going
Btw ur editing style is similar to Jenny Hoyos's long from content...
I think her audience will like ur videos as well
pearl spruce
i like the video, but the packaging/idea feels so "clickbaity". how does ryan trahan make you taller overnight? maybe in the title there should be a message from him or a screenshot of a video with text like "this is the secret" or something. especially since he isn't even in the video.