is this a good outro?

[floral blaze]

i don't mind if you give tips for me to make a better one

[meager trellis]

Only have one call to action, otherwise they won't do any

Them watching the next video is probably the most important as it increases session time.
So, you could have the next video thumbnail in the centre of the screen with the text above saying 'Watch another video?' or something

[floral blaze]

thanks

[floral blaze]

what about this

[meager trellis]

Na, only have one call to action.
Get rid of the subscribe text, the like button, the Discord, and TikTok tag

Could have them in your video description or pin as your top comment

But when it comes to the end screen, you need to only have one CTA, because they’re more likely to do it. But, if you had a screen full of call to actions, they’re more likely to do none of them

[floral blaze]

oh ok

[floral blaze]

like this

[tardy cypress]

Id your comfortable using your voice it will be more effective

But that's better yea

[meager trellis]

Better, but the box is too big. Either make it standard size or remove it completely I’d say