#HONEST THOUGHTS!

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dire oasis
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How can I IMPROVE on this already solid vid? What analysis might be MISSING?

rotund osprey
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Based on the retention graph on the timeline one can see that many viewers are jumping and skipping to the parts where you reveal the actors. In your intro you pixelated and hide the actors, which is great because it opens a curiosity gap, but then you reveal them too fast at the beginning of each sub-part. Maybe try to reverse the order, so first setup the new actor without revealing who you analyze, then build tension to critic what is good and bad and then reveal the actor with its rating. That way the tension builds up and that might improve your retention and skipping

dire oasis
rotund osprey
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