#HONEST THOUGHTS!
rotund osprey
Based on the retention graph on the timeline one can see that many viewers are jumping and skipping to the parts where you reveal the actors. In your intro you pixelated and hide the actors, which is great because it opens a curiosity gap, but then you reveal them too fast at the beginning of each sub-part. Maybe try to reverse the order, so first setup the new actor without revealing who you analyze, then build tension to critic what is good and bad and then reveal the actor with its rating. That way the tension builds up and that might improve your retention and skipping
dire oasis
Based on the retention graph on the timeline one can see that many viewers are j...
Hmmm, how far into it would I go until I Reveal? I can’t CRITQUE/show evidence without showing the clip of SAID actor tho?
rotund osprey
Hmmm, how far into it would I go until I Reveal? I can’t CRITQUE/show evidence w...
I know but you could first explain the good or bad way the actor did one thing, then say why it is important for filmmaking / story and THEN show the evidence or example of the actor. But that was just an idea for you to consider, your video is really great overall 😉
dire oasis
I know but you could first explain the good or bad way the actor did one thing, ...
I appreciate the kind words fr, is there any chance you could provide a specific example/script etc? I certainly am also looking into the retention graph and not sure how to avoid the drop in the middle of each critique