#These are Minecraft's Most Dangerous Players

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glad prism
elder pasture
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I think maybe add like ominous smoke around the bottom or even ominous fire in the background with flames/sparks even blending in to the foreground.
One thing thats missing though is definetely contrast.

heavy zephyr
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yeah get some red fire in there

prisma needle
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Really neat how there is absolutely no mistaking this is a Minecraft video. I love the title, very intriguing. I do like simpler thumbnails too but, for me, I think you could do with adding some information in this one. Something to intrigue, something to clarify, some action, emotion etc.

If your video is what I think it is about, maybe you could add some hint in the thumbnail which shows the danger. Be specific. Pick one player, who has done one thing which is dangerous. Unfortunately without playing Minecraft my “dangerous” example will be laughable, but:

LHS Minecraft player, RHS “he killed x” or “K/D of 10” does that make sense?

Also maybe try to add some sort of setting for the thumbnail to take place in, wasted opportunity just simply black background. The others mentioned fire which is neat, what about fire in some significant place in Minecraft?

Does it need all three characters there?

Hope this helps 🫡

formal current
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your packaging lacks a layer of intrigue

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for example ^

glad prism
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Do you have any suggestions on ho i could make it better

formal current
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I live by the saying, “volume negates luck”

In this context, what that means is that if I think of like 100 different titles/idea variations of something I want to make, surely one (and hopefully more) of the 100 will stand out.

I’m not sure how much control you have over the content here, but here’s an example of iterating over the idea.

These are Minecraft’s most dangerous players.

Minecraft’s most dangerous players hunt me.

I was hunted by Minecraft’s most dangerous players.

Surviving Minecraft’s Most Dangerous Players

Trapping Minecraft’s Most Dangerous Players

I think you get the point. You can get feedback from people all day long but it will serve you best to create a framework for how you create and qualify ideas so that you can systematically create sustaining results.

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The video I’m about to start working on has 11 potential titles. Mind you, I haven’t even started on the video and there’s already 11 options for the title.

still mesa
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To me, danger = red

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I would try to make it more psychological in that way

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Just a quick thought

foggy skiff
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Make the background fire

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You can just search up on google "4k fire wallpaper" and you should find some good ones

heavy zephyr
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Yea lol

foggy skiff
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Actually I have another good idea. You could have the enderman particles around the players and have them looking in different directions to make them seem more sinister.