#The Art of Repositioning

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calm current
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Roast my "The Art of Repositioning" Thumbnail

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is this good??

obtuse rain
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Not the best


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Here’s some ways u could improve it:

  • the split (white line) should be perfectly centered
  • remove “reposition like a pro” - it doesn’t add any value to the thumbnail, imo
  • the green tick and the red “x” icons are not the same style, making it messier, so remove them (they also don’t add any value)
  • use “wrong” instead of “mistake”, so that the two words are opposite
  • i like the green/red tints on the images, but the text now blends in way to much, so make all the text white, i think
  • in this case, angled text looks bad, so make it straight and larger, to fill the whole with of their image
calm current
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i should make correct and wrong straight??

obtuse rain
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Yes

calm current
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okay

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thank you

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is this better??

obtuse rain
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The white line still isn’t centered
 i mean the green part is smaller than the red part

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Also, make the text larger i think

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It is better, though

calm current
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is it equal now??

obtuse rain
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Yup, as far as i can tell

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But the text still isn’t visible enough


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I’d say make it larger

calm current
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ohh yeah the text

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is it good now??

obtuse rain
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As an example: look how large and bold the text in this thumbnail is

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Also notice how it has a black outline. You should also to it to make the text more visible

calm current
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i did some tweaks

cosmic lily