#Which intro is better

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timber olive
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  1. AI Controlled me on roblox and gave me a set of dares to do. If I don't follow these dares, I have to suffer a punishment.
  2. AI Gave me a set of Dares to do and If I fail to do them, I have to suffer a punishment.
cloud pendant
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The second one

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I am guessing you will actually name the punishment in the final video, right?

timber olive
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so people stay longer to find out what it is

cloud pendant
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I think it depends on how bad the punishment is

timber olive
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Mhm

cloud pendant
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I mean if you promise you’ll eat a gost pepper or idk what else would be really crazy, ppl will stay longer to see if you will have to do it

timber olive
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Hm. well, this vid is inside of roblox

cloud pendant
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Oooohh, so the punishment will also be in roblox. I am guessing ur channel is faceless, right?

timber olive
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Yes

stable musk
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whats the title and thumbnail

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or title at least

timber olive
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A.I. Controlled Me In Roblox

stable musk
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i think theres an alternative to those two options where it better meets expectations and better informs the viewer of what the video contains

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for example

I am going to let AI Controll me on roblox. It's going to be giving me a set of dares to do and if I do not follow its instructions I will have to suffere a severe punishment.

timber olive
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Yeah right

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That does work better

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Only thing is.. AI doesnt give out the best severe punishment things

stable musk
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the two you have are a little confusing in my opinion

timber olive
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I'll get it to

timber olive
stable musk
timber olive
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Right ok

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thanks man, your really helpful

stable musk
spare crag
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2*
alt: I played truth or dare with AI. If I don't do the dares, I suffer a punishment.

dusk willow
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"Will I be punished? AI dared me! I need to [state the dare in couple words only] otherwise [state the punishment in couple words only]." Personally I prefer small and direct sentences. Its each to comprehend. Mention what it is minimally and keep adding details like taking off each layer of an onion.

sly bluff
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*Definitely

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it's much more consice

timber olive
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Okay

deep kiln
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2 easy to understand i would just ad images so people get the detailes of the video 🤩

deep kiln