give me a detailed list of things to improve

[muted elm]

https://youtu.be/HocyiG5fGhY?si=t7m6UM-2whicCuNY
I really need somethings to improve

[potent grove]

I think the title would work better if you cut out the "my movie"

"I recreated Famous Movies in Roblox"

[muted elm]

i added it to get the search views

will it get suggested with no first views tho?

[potent grove]

what do you mean by "search views"? You mean tags?

[muted elm]

no like when ppl search for "roblox my movie" or "my movie"

[potent grove]

the reason why I said to remove the "my movie" is because it doesnt sound like a real sentence. How about "I recreated famous scenes in my roblox movie"

the "my movie" in your title feels like its in the wrong part of the sentence

[muted elm]

its the games title tho

i can do i recreated famous scenes in roblox my movie

but that doesnt change much

[potent grove]

"in my roblox movie" sounds cleaner imo

[muted elm]

i have nothing to lose rn

[potent grove]

I really like your thumbnail tho

[muted elm]

so i will change it

thanks for the feedback

but like when i meant give me improvements to make

i meant the video content

[potent grove]

The title and thumbnail is the first impression tho. thats crucial to getting people to click and watch

[muted elm]

the content is so bad tho that i got like 1 minutes average watch time

i am gonna improve both things tho

[potent grove]

the thumbnail gave me an impression of the video being funny, and it caught my attention. so you got that part right

I'd say that you should try to sound like you're excited to recreate the titanic scene. Your voice is very low.

and maybe some upbeat music in the background can help bring a funny, energetic vibe,

[muted elm]

yeah i am kinda new to talking in a video

[potent grove]

You got it tho

[muted elm]

so i am working on that

[potent grove]

Dont stop

[muted elm]

i am not stoping

this video gave me motivation to really continue

it got like 16K impressions

[potent grove]

Dannnnnnggggg

[muted elm]

thats 16k ppl that could have watched my content

[potent grove]

Wow. whats the ctr%

[muted elm]

3.4%

so like the thumbnail gotta improve

[potent grove]

yeah. did you put anything under tags?

[muted elm]

no

[potent grove]

Like where did those impressions come from

[muted elm]

suggestions

[potent grove]

huh

Which videos were suggesting it

[muted elm]

let me see

[potent grove]

You can see what the viewers were watching before, and you can try to line it up with what their videos are like

[muted elm]

where is that tho

i cant seem to find it

[potent grove]

analytics

first go to your content in youtube studio

then click on the analytics button on the video

then you click on reach

there should be a button like this

then go to reach

and you'll see impressions and where they are coming from

[muted elm]

it says not enough data

the video is only like 14 hours ago

[austere glacier]

Yeah first thing like chill dude mentioned change the title. Ranking in search with SEO is old news. It's good for some types of content especially like tutorials and content thats closely paired with like a information website, but otherwise just focus on appealling to audiences, as most people as possible.

Secondly, the screen ratio doesn't make so good of a first impression. Maybe see if you can make the screen ratio a bit more fit to the screen.

Thirdly, speak up. Don't be quite.

Fourthly, big thing.... you said you want to make more "mature"-ish content. Cool! But if thats what you want to do, show it to the audience... right now it just feels like a generic Roblox video. Not much personality, no story telling, no thought into editing (again editing isn't just like fast cuts and stuff, it's also about the pauses and emphasazing some scenes by making it breathe and also the risers and like the sfx).

Lastly, make it longer than 5 minutes. Imo if you're just starting out with gaming content, 10 to maybe 15 minutes is the sweet spot. More video length will come as you make a story out of the video. 5 minutes doesn't make the audience want to click becuase they see the thumbnail and it's like cool, it's great looking, lots of effort went in. But it's only 5 minutes... so like for them that feels kind of like a joke in some ways.

[austere glacier]

just give it like a week and check back at analytics

that should be enough

[muted elm]

i will improve on all the things you said but on the story telling point

how do i make my video story driven

and for the editing i didnt understand half of what you meant

could you reccomend me a series on video editing to watch so i can learn if possible

[austere glacier]

I believe I said some in #💬・chat too, if I didn't my bad. The best series on video editing for a more laid back tone and a more mature-esque style, watch Ryan Trahan's penny series, not just the most famous one, but also the older one

[muted elm]

do you mean like i watch the series and analyze it or are you meantioning like a tutorial about someone explaining his editing style

prob the first

@austere glacier and also i noticed alot of youtubers and stuff switch between a roll for when they are saying important stuff and b roll like most of the time

how could something like that be done in my case

[austere glacier]

don't analyze it, or watch someone else explain it... just watch it

don't over complicate things

[muted elm]

well if watch it without paying attention its really not gonna do much

i am the type of guy to get hooked into the content so much that i forgot why i came in the first place

[austere glacier]

It's going to help trust me

Just watch it, take note of some of the editing choices he and his editor decides to do

Don't over-analyze or over-complicate it. There's a thing called analysis paralysis, not something you want to get into.

[austere glacier]

For B-roll.... I'm not too sure with this type of content, but you can still get a story without b-roll. Just use the harmon circle and after you use it for a few videos here and there, change it a bit to your own liking.

[muted elm]

wouldnt the intro be a b-roll

from my understanding b roll is when there is like animation or something and a voice over

[austere glacier]

No

[austere glacier]

It's actually more complicated than that... in that case everything would be a b-roll

it's basically like secondary footage

like footage that isn't like the main

[muted elm]

hmmm intresting

btw is there like a library for music in background and sound effects