Hey all! Looking for feedback for my video. I recently pivoted from gameplay stuff to more commentary style videos with gaming as the topic. Keen to hear some feedback, the good and the bad. Thanks all!
https://youtu.be/zrpmTnCuqdE
#Feedback for my commentary video
sleek parrot
oak yoke
Hey all! Looking for feedback for my video. I recently pivoted from gameplay stu...
seems pretty good, only comment I have is that the intro isn't that good
the music is almost over-powering your voice
makes it harder to hear the intro
orchid tundra
respectfully i dont like it
the pacing is waay to slow and you give way too many examples at the beginning of the video
if i wasnt reviewing it i prolly would have clicked off before you even got to the point where you explained why every influencer has a drink now
Honestly i think the issue is the concept, It would probably make a good short but there really isnt that enough substance in the topic to make a 10 minute video worth watching
Good thumbnail tho
sleek parrot
seems pretty good, only comment I have is that the intro isn't that good
Thanks for the feedback, glad it's overall positive. I have had some trouble in the past getting the audio levels right.
Sounds like intro and pacing need work. I'll look to make some changes in future vids
sleek parrot
if i wasnt reviewing it i prolly would have clicked off before you even got to t...
I appreciate the honesty! That's how I learn to get better. I'll work on pacing and the hook in my future videos. Do you think overall my videos should be shorter? What time should I aim for?