#Feedback for my commentary video

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sleek parrot
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Hey all! Looking for feedback for my video. I recently pivoted from gameplay stuff to more commentary style videos with gaming as the topic. Keen to hear some feedback, the good and the bad. Thanks all!
https://youtu.be/zrpmTnCuqdE

Have you noticed how all the big gaming influencers have their own drinks now? I decided to analyse their drinks and see what's going on for myself.

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oak yoke
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the music is almost over-powering your voice

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makes it harder to hear the intro

orchid tundra
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respectfully i dont like it

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the pacing is waay to slow and you give way too many examples at the beginning of the video

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if i wasnt reviewing it i prolly would have clicked off before you even got to the point where you explained why every influencer has a drink now

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Honestly i think the issue is the concept, It would probably make a good short but there really isnt that enough substance in the topic to make a 10 minute video worth watching

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Good thumbnail tho

sleek parrot
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Sounds like intro and pacing need work. I'll look to make some changes in future vids

sleek parrot