#Roast my video script so far

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buoyant cove
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Title: The Man Who SECRETLY Owns Everything
Intro: “Ze great reset, the great reset, the great reset” etc etc; (clips racing by really fast [with sound riser]). [sound effect to cut it off] [music starts] The great reset… is the ultimate plan of the man who secretly owns everything. A man SO POWERFUL, that he controls 95% of the world’s GDP. The man who controls every government in the entire world. Introducing Klaus Schwab. In this video, I’m going to expose his insane story of how he rose to power, and what his ominous “great reset” initiative is.

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night storm
# buoyant cove Title: The Man Who SECRETLY Owns Everything Intro: “Ze great reset, the great re...

I mean, I just did some surface level research real quick, and obviously I could be wrong, but it seems like alot of the claims you made here are for lack of a better word "very" exaggerated. No, that man doees not control 95% of the world's GDP. That's outrageous lol. The current world's GDP is estimated to be about 100 trillion dollars give or take in circulation every single year. 5% of that is 5 trillion dollars. The combined networth of all the bililonaires in the world is estimated to be around 14 trillion dollars at any given time. That would mean that

  1. All the billionaires are lying about being billionaires together in a massive co-op style way
  2. We the common people don't have any money

Not just that but also "man who controls every government in the entire world, and who secretly owns everything"
And "ominous great reset is"

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I do like where your head is headed. It sets up at one, it sets up stakes, and it creates a curiosity loop. The only problem is, I'm guessing you're going for a bit more of an older audience, more magnates media/company man type of TA.

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In that case, they know when they're being feeded over-exaggeration or not.

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I think rather than making over-the-top exaggerated claims that has no fact-checking done and doesn't make sense

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Try to use real information, but package it in a way that feels like that

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here's an example

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"The world economic forum/the world economic forum/the world economic forum"

[Jump cut from clip to clip of different people saying WEF]
[Finally after a cut to black, then cut to color your voice starts to come in]

The world economic forum. A group shrouded in mystery. Many believe that it's the real life equivalent of the Illuminati. But what exactly does it does? Why does it exist? Who is the man behind it all... AND why after all these years is he stepping down from it all? \

toxic muralBOT
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realyunzer has been warned

Reason: Duplicated text

night storm
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not the great reset

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but in the intro you just talk about the great reset

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that's not a pay off is it?

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I'll bet a hefty sum of money that a handful of people would click off at "the great reset" phrases in your intro. It isn't what they clicked for afterall.

buoyant cove