I am a beginner but I worked really hard or sound effects and background music on this video so sort of advice around that would be insanely appreciated! Thanks!
#Roast My Goofy Shorts Video
ornate rapids
silk harbor
I actually really liked this! I think the way you could improve for a future video would be to get more interesting angles and shots. If you haven't seen, check out Isaiah Photo on youtube (seems like similar to your style, maybe you're already inspired by him). His shorts feel like this, but usually have a ton of movement or different locations. Maybe something to consider.
for this one tho, It's pretty solid and I'd post it
rough niche
This is a solid short! Simple but great concept (the climax is at the tail end, helping with retention. It's very visual which means ppl watching without audio aren't missing much). You take the viewer all the way from deflated to pop, bridging the gaps with hyper speed. Picked a nice bright ball against a neutral background so the ball + pump + you stand out for the thumbnail. Nice pacing, didn't waste any time. The one thing I'd recommend that I think would take this to the next level is to get one shot (during the shoot) where the ball is really big in the foreground, and you are pumping hard in the background, with the pump number in the middle, that can act as the thumbnail. Great work!
ornate rapids
I actually really liked this! I think the way you could improve for a future vid...
Thank ya for your advice man! Will definitely work to incorporate a better variety of shots next time and will for sure check out your recommendation!