which of these two looks better and how can I improve the better one | Created | Page 1

willow pebble Apr 23, 2024, 1:51 PM

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Both too busy and hard to understand to me

hot osprey Apr 23, 2024, 1:51 PM

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any suggestions to improve them

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or a completely new idea

willow pebble Apr 23, 2024, 1:52 PM

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But I like the split screen idea, it needs improvements tho

hot osprey Apr 23, 2024, 1:53 PM

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maybe I should remove the number and bank balance from the second half

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too crowded?

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work on colouring a bit?

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can't think of anything else tho

willow pebble Apr 23, 2024, 1:53 PM

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And I like "Why You AREN'T Achieving YOUR Goals" title

hot osprey Apr 23, 2024, 1:54 PM

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so split screen but remove the do this

willow pebble Apr 23, 2024, 1:54 PM

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No put a full face plan of you sleeping on the left

hot osprey Apr 23, 2024, 1:54 PM

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so I can use the second title

willow pebble Apr 23, 2024, 1:54 PM

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yeah

hot osprey Apr 23, 2024, 1:57 PM

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yo @willow pebble

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what about now?

willow pebble Apr 23, 2024, 2:11 PM

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You didnt chang ethe left side

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I suggest doing full & face plan

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from the front

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as if you were laying down

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the tiktok logos can be instead of ZZzzz

hot osprey Apr 23, 2024, 2:14 PM

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willow pebble I suggest doing full & face plan

okay I'll try that

willow pebble Apr 23, 2024, 2:21 PM

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Basically you stuff needs to be bigger cuz its too small and doesn't stand out like quality right now (if that makes sense)

peak sand Apr 23, 2024, 2:31 PM

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Yeah. Need eye catcher

#which of these two looks better and how can I improve the better one