#Roast "I Trapped My Friends In ROBLOX Backrooms!" video

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kindred star
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not fully done ofc

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the picture is a thumbnail

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@plucky sparrow

night rain
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You already posted this

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same comments

kindred star
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wym same comments

night rain
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its a btit hard to understand so I would use text/ subtitles

kindred star
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oh you mean the vid

night rain
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yeah

kindred star
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its a big extension of the previous version

night rain
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but the visuals are sick

kindred star
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back then i posted a very raw 1 minute preview

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this is a 4:46 minute video

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the main thing im very concerned about is the overall flow of the video

night rain
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Oh yeah

sacred token
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Still, add subtitles to the intro

kindred star
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in my honest opinion it's getting disturbed at some points of the videos and i cant pin it down

night rain
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The big thing you shoud do is to subtitle the video for the important words

kindred star
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got it

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what else besides the subtitles though

kindred star
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also i shouldnt have to say this but the video is WIP, as stated in the title of the video

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the reason im posting it here rn however is to pin down all of the issues and to fix them before i go into advanced editing/polishing stuff

night rain
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at 30s you say HOW 2 times within 10s

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There's a lot of explanation

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and you repeat the same stuf like roblox itself isnt scary ..... then graphics themselves wont be scary to them

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Dont explain all the levels before it starts

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you can tease them but it takes too long to start

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we want action

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Especially after the crazy intro you did

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It takes 5 minutes to start

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5 minutes intro!

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it sounds like a How I made the backrooms more than I trapped my friends for challenges

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I would tease and put the explanations just before the levels

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but the production quality is really good

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and subs

kindred star
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got it

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what do you think would be a good length for the intro

night rain
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Like a minute MAX

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you can make a list or map to tease the different challenges with an image/text but dont explain everything at first

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it gets boring and we want it to start

kindred star
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jeez

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but fair point

night rain
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I'm trying to help and I know you got potential quality is solid

kindred star
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quality may be solid because i spent alot of time on this

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although inexperience with longer vids just shines in here quite brightly

kindred star
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it genuinely felt painful

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but i removed 3 minutes of the video

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now its 2 minutes at best

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quite literally i cannot compress it any further

night rain
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It'll be worth it but you can put the other parts later pieces by pieces just not the ones you repeated already

kindred star
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yea ofc

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its actually quite enlightening

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simple "5 minutes for an intro" sentence may have just saved this video from being boring

night rain
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Haha

kindred star
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practically remade the entire intro