Roast this please

[valid osprey]

The title currently is: What Regrets Would You Have If You Died Today?
but now I'm thinking that won't get click so roast the title as well

[unborn bridge]

not very clickable, too much text that looks weird etc

[tame monolith]

this thumbnail looks lazy

[primal siren]

thumbnail looks u didnt even try

u say ur lazy but it looks u were lazy doing this thumbnail

so it works

[valid osprey]

yea, this is nowhere near the final thumbnail, just edition 1

[valid osprey]

yea, this is nowhere near the final thumbnail, just edition 1

I made this post to know where it lies short so I can improve it

[valid osprey]

Agreed, thanks for the feedback. What do you think I should do though?

should I remove myself from the image, change facial expressions or change location

[primal siren]

make it clickable

[valid osprey]

what text should I remove and what should I keep

what do I change

[valid osprey]

yea that's the goal

[primal siren]

remove the rest in piece thing boi

why r u upside down

whats ur video about

[valid osprey]

here are a few other editions

[valid osprey]

wdym

[valid osprey]

.

[primal siren]

all of them bad

[valid osprey]

alright that's good

now what would you do to make it from bad to good

it doesn't even need to be this idea

A completely new one would also work

[distant blade]

too long and boring

[distant blade]

Didnt think about it that way haha

[valid osprey]

yea I figured

any alternatives you would suggest

also thumbnail is obviously awful, any tips?

[distant blade]

Dont use pink glow keep it simple like white and make the sky/trees darker so it pops

[primal siren]

smth as simple as this

simplicity is better than over corwdiness

crowdiness

[valid osprey]

That's a better idea, my idea was standing over my grave thinking of regrets but it's too complicated

thanks a lot for your valuable feedback @primal siren

[primal siren]

yuh ofc

[valid osprey]

do you have a channel of some sort

[distant blade]

yeah too long to understand

[valid osprey]

agreed

alright one more thing

I'm thinking maybe I have an image of me behind the text

[distant blade]

no

I mean what layout/ composition

which design

[valid osprey]

one sec

[distant blade]

Like this or with the grave

[valid osprey]

I thought I had a screenshot of what it would look like

but I can't find it

[unborn bridge]

Tbh it looks like it was made in one minute and without thinking

[valid osprey]

like jotyz's idea

[valid osprey]

na actually, I made it a few weeks ago and it took me 2 hours or so

[unborn bridge]

Sry but still like it just doesnt look very clickable

[unborn bridge]

There's too much going on and all the stuff doesn't fit to each other

[valid osprey]

I took the picture, I looked for a background image, thought of the text then posted it on thumbnail roast and kept improving it and making new editions with feedback, all to create this first edition

[valid osprey]

no need to be sorry, you're completely right

[distant blade]

it just looks like too much

[valid osprey]

I'd take an image like this and slap some text like I should've asked her out

instead of my overcomplicated idea

[distant blade]

but I like the grave and lazy idea

[valid osprey]

then what do you suggest I do?

[distant blade]

is this text related to your video tho???

[valid osprey]

.

[distant blade]

not putting pink, green and glow to make it too much

[valid osprey]

jotyz made that text specifically for my video

[primal siren]

ye i just gave an example of someones regret but i wasnt asure if it was one

[unborn bridge]

Yeah colors are also super important

[valid osprey]

I probably wouldn't put that, I'd put something to do with business or something like I should've talked to my mum more or something like that

but generally your idea

[primal siren]

nice

[valid osprey]

yo @primal siren what font did you use here

also how does, I wish I took the risk sound for the text

since my channel is mainly a self-improvement/business channel, I think it would work well

also viking, I'm planning on making something with the grave and lazy idea as well and test which one gets me a higher ctr then keeping that

[distant blade]

sounds better

[distant blade]

Good 👍