#shower hacks you must try

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grave sandal
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I CANT DECIDE PLEASE HELP + ROAST

stark tartan
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The contrast on the colors are just not it. The text feels somehow just like idk, doesn't look good in there, maybe it's the font, color or the location but idk.

stone blaze
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I dont get it

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Shower hack but it's a tooth brush and work smart?

stark tartan
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And brushing ur theeth in shower? That's the coolest and the most attention grapping hack you have?

stone blaze
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It doesnt make sense to me + it doesn't stand out everything is white/beige

stark tartan
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And I would suggest using some other hack and title. Like if it has idk 10 hacks, the title could be:

15 Shower Hacks You MUST Try!

stark tartan
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Some cooler and more attention grapping hack than brushing ur theeth

stone blaze
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"15 Shower Hacks You MUST Try!" this aswell

stark tartan
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Mrbeast also said that you need to make it like that the possible viewer gets kinda feeling that he has to watch it or its on his head the rest of the day. It's like you MUST try

stone blaze
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right

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Yup it's called FOMO, fear of missing out

stark tartan
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Yeah I was abt to say it but didn't end up saying it for clearness

tender sphinx
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Search on YT "shower hacks".

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The videos that did well have a left side with a ✅ and a right side with a ❌.

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You could do something similar. Clean and clear.

pliant cliff
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I would also simplify the concept of the "shower" ie. all blue background with water spraying at an angle (ie coming from the shower head) then the tooth brush and paste. Reduce the elements to 3.