#shower hacks you must try
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The contrast on the colors are just not it. The text feels somehow just like idk, doesn't look good in there, maybe it's the font, color or the location but idk.
And brushing ur theeth in shower? That's the coolest and the most attention grapping hack you have?
It doesnt make sense to me + it doesn't stand out everything is white/beige
Thats what im saying
And I would suggest using some other hack and title. Like if it has idk 10 hacks, the title could be:
15 Shower Hacks You MUST Try!
And this is a good point
Some cooler and more attention grapping hack than brushing ur theeth
"15 Shower Hacks You MUST Try!" this aswell
That kind of title also has like idk energy or something, unlike just shower hacks you must try
Mrbeast also said that you need to make it like that the possible viewer gets kinda feeling that he has to watch it or its on his head the rest of the day. It's like you MUST try
Yeah I was abt to say it but didn't end up saying it for clearness
Search on YT "shower hacks".
The videos that did well have a left side with a â and a right side with a â.
You could do something similar. Clean and clear.
I would also simplify the concept of the "shower" ie. all blue background with water spraying at an angle (ie coming from the shower head) then the tooth brush and paste. Reduce the elements to 3.