#ROAST MY VIDEO PLZ
shadow escarp
Ok so
The hook is good. However I would cut the first, maybe 2 seconds of that footage, just to get to the reaction way quicker
30 seconds in, and you still aren't skating. I clicked to see skating, so the reaction at the beginning is good but just get to the point quicker this will improve audience retention.
Ok but actual, some of the reactions at the beginning are really good (the ones after 30s) so keep them in. Just cut the clips down to get to the skating faster.
The tripping over part is funny haha
As someone who has grown up in surf and skate park culture though, this is incredibly cool. The concept of having MASSIVE skate baggy pants is hilarious, maybe make some videos of walking around in public in them and filming people's reactions?
Great video, just cut to the intro way faster for next time. Keep grinding buddyđ„
hallow wasp
30 seconds in, and you still aren't skating. I clicked to see skating, so the re...
Aww wow, thank you so so much for your time and input. I really appreciate you writing all of the improvements, I will definitely work on it & youâre so right about watching a skate video & you still didnât see it đ
hallow wasp
Great video, just cut to the intro way faster for next time. Keep grinding buddy...
Thank you so much, thatâs honestly what I wanted to capture. I know thereâs a lot of cool locations & skaters here in hawaii that no one knows about.
I also, personally canât skate anymore b/c of my Job, I canât get hurt :(( so filming skaters & doing youtube videos is not only to entertain & inspire others but its for my mental health as well, away from my job lolđ
hallow wasp
Hope you can skate again soon
Me toođđ„č
livid ravine
Thumbnail is confusing but we've already roasted it in #1069063845198438483
Now, title is skating in baggiest pants, I would've like to see you skating as the opening shot
and it would also help with gaining the viewer's trust right away and lower the intro drop-off
The edit at 25s also felt like too much because we still havent gotten what we clicked for so it's slowing
It takes 2 full minutes to start, when you want to aim for like 10 ish seconds if possible
Last 10-15s can be cut it's already over and people who are new viewers will probably all click off
Which would drop retention by a tiny bit only but still
But still a good video idea!