ROAST: Are Shorts rotting your brain?

[twin zealot]

did i cook? Lemme know what you think - thanks in advance! : )

[twin zealot]

not totally convinced about the eyes tho…

i dunno but i feel like its good

am i missing anything?

[pseudo fable]

I don`t know what to think really

I`m not a fan of the crazy bug white glow around you

and the eyes might seem like it`s too much

[twin zealot]

yeah valid

first time editing like photoshop rather just colour correction

thanks for the feedback!

[pseudo fable]

of course, it`s a nice edit just might not be the most optimized

[abstract otter]

What if you did a SUPER closeup of eye/top of head.

You made a single pupil the short logo. And then actually showed the top half of your head missing and your brain rotting?

[twin zealot]

reading my mind now are we lol?! Ive literally just started working on something similar right now - just had to finish college work 🙄

[twin zealot]

cheers for the idea!

@abstract otter - had these two ideas

what we thinking?

Bottom would be TOUGH to edit but i reckon it would payoff

then again the 50:50 split thumbnails usually do well lol

[pseudo fable]

But idk about 50/50 for this title

[full charm]

it actually fits very well as it shows a progression of "brainrot" by consuming short form content

[full charm]

this idea is probably the best one, albeit it would require a very good execution

additionally its worth mentioning that there shouldnt be any small details, just you at day 1 and at day 10-30 whatever it is with your eyes being very tired, huge eye bags and more indicators of your fatigue