#BRUTALLY ROAST MY NEW VIDEO 🔥

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flint brook
vital plaza
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nice video. i think you could imrpove lights in your room and make the setup look more nicer behind you. nice one though

flint brook
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Thank you tho 🤝 were u able to watch the whole vid and engaged?

vital plaza
vital plaza
flint brook
vital plaza
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maybe the editing was too good at intro so viewers will expect the same for entire video and i didnt really had a feel to watch after the second trick maybe thats cuz i wasnt interested much into the topic due my own preferences. probably a person who like the idea will watch it full

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I am your new subscriber btw 🙂

flint brook
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Hahaha thank you so much I appreciate it! 🤝 my acc channel is @flint brook this is a new one I’m posting on too

civic mortar
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I watched it and I found myself enjoying it and I even learned something

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It was good to the point where the things I didn't like I had to force myself to think about

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Like for me I didn't get the cat joke and the sarcasm was starting to annoy me halfway through (this is my personal nit picks)

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Idk maybe be more genuine? Not sure if that's even the term I'd use

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I just didn't like sarcasm I'd say

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Other than that in the viewer aspect the video was actually good and it's something I could find myself watching if I was bored on the homepage

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Good video 👍

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It's weird seeing you only having 25 views and 13 subs,if you keep up with the good quality I can see you getting around 10-100k views on vids

flint brook
# civic mortar Idk maybe be more genuine? Not sure if that's even the term I'd use

Thank you so much I appreciate that a ton 🤝🤝 perhaps it may seem like the jokes didn’t land Aswell so I’ll work on delivery! This feedback meant a TON I’ve had years of experience so it’s a new channel but I’m not new to this, would you have an idea of what type of niche would best fit? Also was there anything else even little inconveniences u didn’t like in the vid? I love leaning into psychology and acting so if I wanna dominate the space I rlly wanna make the BEST vids in the category🎭

golden raft
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I felt like the camera angle was a bit high and weird

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But I also have to agree on lighting, you don't wanna make it professional but it's proven that perfect lights improves retention

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When you talk about a bone or a part of the face I would use arrow to show to make it better for visual learners

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at 1:40 we can clearly see that you're reading a script and looking away

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It was really well edited and written tho I have to say