can you give me feedback guys 🙏
#2020: What The F**k Actually Happened
north barn
shut prawn
Sorry if it`s a bit late
I think I`ve seen this already
but, I like the yelow text
But it`s hidden and we cannot see it
and the right, it`s too busy
no way to understand what is happening in the thumbnail
so Id say text above your head and an other thing on the rught side, but I like the fire
It would stand out more definitely
shut prawn
Ive seen the last video about staring at a wall
I have to say
Idea sounds really boring when I saw it on youtube
(and the packaging too)
I had to be honest
like
There's nothing that's intriguing to that I feel like
There is obvious reasons of why
why the narcissist video did well and not the last one
There's no reason of why we wanna click on the others
Also 30 days in 4 minutes, it might also affect what people think
That there won't be much content in the video
After watching the video, we dont even see you starting at it
Which is the title and whole idea...
Show don't tell
We wanna see what happens not hear about it
I don't know it's just some quick thoughts I had
Okay I think I said enough haha
And it looks like I'm talking to myself in here
And share your next stuff before posting so we can help you
Good luck man
🙂
north barn
@shut prawn yo man, sorry I didn't get the notifications at all, I am randomly scrolling and I just noticed this, I know the video is not good at all
I made it a while ago in a very short time and I did not post it so I just threw it out there without expecting anything
I'm working on my next video at the moment, and I'm putting actual time into this one, thank you for your feedback though, you rock!!
btw tag me if u reply to this! so I can get the notification or just pm me!
shut prawn
btw tag me if u reply to this! so I can get the notification or just pm me!
test haha
Well can`t wait to see the next one to see how you improve
north barn
Well can`t wait to see the next one to see how you improve
thanks, gonna update you👊